Bar - I Got This (Lyrical style)

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EbhO6PhtX3c


bar- i got this


wrote after a creative weekend lol

feedback apprceciated!

[Mc Cubz]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EbhO6PhtX3c


bar- i got this


wrote after a creative weekend lol

feedback apprceciated!

that's decent m8 - glad to see ppl doing something abit different!

[Edge]

good flow and tight lyrics... i wish u wouldve put a chorus in with words tho instead of just the beat playing... nice shit tho

[Emadyville]

Loved the intro on this, thought it fit well, especially cause sometimes people do these and they end hurting the whole song.

The delivery started strong, and, didn't fall off at all that I noticed, and that's what really made this dope. Lyrics were dope from what I heard, a few things I don't catch cause of your accent, but that's just me. Loved the end of the I think third verse, mighta been second, that said I leave you to a past tense

The hook, or I guess lack thereof, was actually pretty good for this, almost like a chill out for 20 seconds and let your mind catch up to what I'm doing. Maybe a few spoken words throughout would have added something, but also maybe not, so either way, this was dope.

Overall man this is a great track, good shit