Roses r Red, Violets r Blue, Fuck Wit Him n Tash Will Kill U

[Tash8]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9723979

thx for the feed






for chambers:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99175

[B.A.D.]

"youre like Eminem, youre always missing proof" I don't think thats a nice thing to say.

ok, about the song... extremely diferent using the Roses beat, I liked that, didnt knew how you were going to approach it, and you didnt dissapoint. The flow was good throughout the song, not one single slip, so thats good.. you just need to smooth it out and FINITO!!! BAMBINO!! lol...

I liked the lyrics, a couple of good punches, some even sounded personal, so that keeps me wondering lol, good writing.

I liked your other song better, specially cuz of the quality. I dont know what you did here that sounds very diferent. But its still enjoyable.

how often can you record? and are you up for another collab?

let me know man. and great song

[classthe_king]

"youre like Eminem, youre always missing proof"

Lmao, that's a great line
I'll check the song in a lil bit

[B.A.D.]

"youre like Eminem, youre always missing proof"

Lmao, that's a great line
I'll check the song in a lil bit

it is, but I mean... it can be a bit offensive you know?

[classthe_king]

"youre like Eminem, youre always missing proof"

Lmao, that's a great line
I'll check the song in a lil bit

it is, but I mean... it can be a bit offensive you know?

I don't think its offensive



Feed: I loved this song, I wish it had better quality, like Big Ax-D said, it sounds weird. Flow was perfect though, best part about the song. Post up the lyrics so I can judge that part better.

[Tash8]

haha ssorry but i didn't mean it to be offensive... uhh the reason the quality was worse because i didnt' record this at my friends studio...anyways i can record whenever ax so send me beats, i'm in dire need of them

here are the lyrics:
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=97951&p=1344916#p1344916

[Emadyville]

Like I told you man, shits dope, this is a sick track with that mixtape feel, cool lyrics and a dope flow

[Block]

I didn't like it. You sound very monotone and the overlays weren't mixed very well, volume-wise. Sorry, man. Apart from that, the flow was decent and the lyrics were good.

[youngfire420]

Flow - Really nice. You rode the beat nice.
Lyrics - Pretty dope. Liked the 'missing Proof' line.
Other - Beat could have been a bit louder in my opinion. Quality could have been a bit better as well.
Overall - 4/5.

[Tash8]

thx guys

[Mr. Chambers]

mixing isn't up to par as usual. your delivery is also downgraded. you sound really bored. flow is getting really solid lately. Lyrics were above average. Can i give you some honest advice. You ain't the most "lyrical" rapper. now don't take that as an insult, your a good story teller and good with emotional songs, so i suggest you keep that in mind when you write. but its also nice to see you step out of your zone a lil. the title drew me in lol. nice beat.

[gutawafang]

Lol at the beat. Can breakdance to it.

Overall, it's not good. Sorry man. Lyrics weren't so good here too man but quite a good flow.

[Tash8]

thx guys

[Tash8]

bumpsz