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Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

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Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

Postby Tash8 » Nov 16th, '10, 06:53

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9880511
http://www.zshare.net/audio/827525213a9547f7/

I've moved on, left home ridin on my own,
away from the life that i have known, I'm alone
stoned, cold as snow I ain't frozen just yet (no)
there's plenty more to go
I know, how I feel I'll feel no mo or will heal,
Sure I've been in worse though you see i'm still here
i'm always on the grind, i'm always killin beats
but regrets on my mind and which always will be is that I left my best friends behind
alone selfishly cause I'm doing what I want, what I think is best for me
no one babysitting me always staying next to me
and these bags of bud
have got me acting up there's no one there to back me up
but I'm man enough to can em up and send em of to canada
even when i'm damaged up, and it's best you fasten up,
cause i'm driving crazy on this ride, fists high, this's why
I'm lit high, when I, spits rhymes
I'll trip minds, why wouldn't I?
it's time to close another chapter
I havta for now and ever after
moments owned with laughter, I crafta
brilliant rhyme
that will catchya
faster than the rapture
--when jesus grabs ya
I'll recapture the spark when i master this art (i promise)
light this flame back in the game and I'll Nasa up the stars
but for now
I'm so cold and alone, no home in the zone
I'm sleeping on the floor
but shiiit, that ain't never stopped me if I recall


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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big "Dik" Ax-D)

Postby BigBangBazinga » Nov 16th, '10, 13:01

Nice man. :y:
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big "Dik" Ax-D)

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 16th, '10, 15:08

Big "dik" Ax-d??????? lol, nah, change it to Big Ax-D. me no like the Dik part.

I thought you were going to add more into the song, make it a complete track. its actually good non the less. I like the flow, but maybe could get the emotion a bit more noticeable. I dunno... I did love it tho, I downloaded it for my bro's computer haha :y:
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big "Dik" Ax-D)

Postby Tash8 » Nov 16th, '10, 17:41

Big Ax-D wrote:Big "dik" Ax-d??????? lol, nah, change it to Big Ax-D. me no like the Dik part.

I thought you were going to add more into the song, make it a complete track. its actually good non the less. I like the flow, but maybe could get the emotion a bit more noticeable. I dunno... I did love it tho, I downloaded it for my bro's computer haha :y:


I was going to man, but I just have not had time, and I wanted something out and thought this was the best thing *plus the story i wrote was a long time ago and I'm not in the same place anymore*
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

Postby Emadyville » Nov 17th, '10, 05:09

Ahh loved this the first time I heard it awhile ago. I'm guessing you redid it, this flow and everything is on point, one part was rushed into the next line, but other than that it was ill. Rhymes were dope, delivery I loved with the laid back feel, and those rhymes like the last third of it were dope, def loved that nasa line. good to see you dropping again sir :y:
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 17th, '10, 23:34

Dope beat by Big Ax-D. I thought your verse was pretty good, lyrics were alright, they got better as they went along. Flow was tight the whole time. Didn't really like your delivery though it was so monotone. Other than that the track was good.
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 18th, '10, 17:50

classthe_king wrote:Dope beat by Big Ax-D.


thanks man :worship:
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

Postby Tash8 » Nov 18th, '10, 22:12

classthe_king wrote:it was so monotone.


jealous??? :p
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 18th, '10, 22:17

Tash8 wrote:
classthe_king wrote:it was so monotone.


jealous??? :p


A little ;)
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Re: Stronger Than Ever (Prod. By Big Ax-D)

Postby Tash8 » Nov 19th, '10, 03:04

Revolutionary wrote:Nice, flow was nice lyrics were cool.
Dope beat :y:
But hey, can you tell me what equipment you exactly use?The quality is great, i want to record but don't know how to get a good quality!


lol i use a 20 dollar mic, and a laptop..that is it. I do not have good quality--people mix it up with good mixing. My quality is shitty, part of the reason why i sound so damn monotone...
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