Thomas & WesT - Fight In Me (Mixtape Single)

[TheOfficialThomas]

Me and West are releasing a 18 track Mixtape CD either by the end of december or early january this is our first single:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c0RS1YwGLLI

Feedback ive given:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=102360

let me know what u guys think!

thanks

[Tha Q]

I actually liked this song...and loved the hook...the hook reminded me of something MJ would do...

your flow and rhyming were on point for most of the song...that is..until you started screaming near the end...

I'm not sure I buy this scream-for-emotion thing that's going on...Some finesse in your tonality and vocal inflections can create emotion without yelling.

Otherwise...loved the song man



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[GibbzyTrShady]

beat is heavy!!! Hook is catchy as hell with a deffo uplifting feeling,
flow is nice bars also nice but some of the pauses in the verse dont kinda fit well
when you flip your flow up it makes the song sound heavy an the eminem mention is nice too
quality is pretty decent !!
well done

[TheOfficialThomas]

thanks guys! the 1st verse was myself 2nd one is west

[TheOfficialThomas]

your flow and rhyming were on point for most of the song...that is..until you started screaming near the end...

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do u mean the 2nd verse?

[Tranquil]

first off this beat is insane, i love it... i didnt really like the hook the first couple of times that i listened, but the more i listened to it the more it grew on me

Your verse is good, the flow dope, the only thing that i dislike in your flow is the pauses.... the lyrics could also be better but still a great verse...

WesT's verse imo just like yours, except he didnt really pause in his verse...

Overall this track is good, i could play it a couple more times and not get sick of it im defiantly going to check this mixtape out....


Could you return the feed for my track?:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=101975

Thanks Bro