love song*please feed*(newlink)

[Enimee]

http://limelinx.com/files/c5de2e89f8391 ... ce4007ff13


rough quality buuuut i like it lemme know what yall think please


(first of many to come) btw its my buddy M.V.P on the guitar and chorus i just did the lyrics and verses enjoy

[_Ironic_]

post a link to where I don't have to download it to listen to it, and I'll give you feedback

[Enimee]

bumP?

[Enimee]

bump???

[gutawafang]

Flow is lacking a little man. Prolly cuz it's live. Quality's pretty good. Delivery's lacking also. But maybe because it's not mixed yet. Some words sound unclear.

Fucking chorus is dope man. But harmonizing can be better man. Your voices need a little adjusting man.

But overall, I'ma say this is dope man. I always like raps like this. Over guitar, no beat. Nice. Keep it coming homie.




And check this out man, this dope. One of my favourite songs. You definitely can get inspiration through the lyrics. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DA6oi5Z01Ac

[DelinQuent]

i remember back when you recorded a diss to me for no reason, making fun of the fact that me and a guy did a love song.

Quite frankly, this is extremely boring. You sound bored spitting, so I'm bored listening.

the flow is back and forth, completely inconsistent. second verse really shows this.

The hook leaves a lot to be desired, the singer uses the same voice throughout without any real melody.

I don't mean to hate, but I do indeed dislike this very much.

[Enimee]

lol big ups for the feed back DQ

and thanks gutta it was recorded in iraq we didnt have alot of options lol but he's a really good artist he does alot of his own music and shit, we'll prolly be droppin another track of 10 soon full audio quality and and shit keep an eye out for it