Cliff Hanger- Wingless Angel (Version 1)

[gutawafang]

Download or listen:
http://usershare.net/o0mgspnc96wj

Just listen:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wvlv4phG5V4

Just download:
http://www.mediafire.com/?cw6pm303pqef37s

Lyrics:
Have you ever loved someone so much that you don't care if she's at fault?
Or you just forgive her for any mitsakes she's made?
Cuz she's your Angel in your eyes forever

I don't care if you care or if you don't care
I swear I don't care and I don't dare
To love you no more, this is going nowhere
I don't care if you care or if you don't care

Do you know that I'm just acting when it's time to show you love?
That I show you how I hate you by ignoring how you move?
And leave it hanging when it's you that's trying to show?
I dodge the arrow that you throw me, turning back and I just go
I surely know that I'm hurting you every minute, every second
Every day and every night, every morning, every evening
All the time it's all for you, all the motherfucking time
I gave in too many times, now loving you is a crime
I don't care no fucking more, if you wanna have me back
My feelings were never spared, how would you account for that?
Do you care, did you ever ever ever ever care?
Whenever I waited for you, I was like forever there
No more games to play no more, I'm so sick of loving you
I don't wanna pamper you, I'm so sick of serving you
Let us make this clean, no more meetings, no more scenes
See me in your escapades, ecstacy or the morphines

I don't care if you care or if you don't care
I swear I don't care and I don't dare
To love you no more, this is going nowhere
I don't care if you care or if you don't care

I'm still alive but just fuck why, you fucking cry, you fucking grieve?
Now you see, that it matters, you really don't want me to leave
I loved you so but why didn't you see that I do, just why you doubt?
It's not the proofs, it's not the eyes, trust and faith it's all about
Have you ever thought about the way it started, and the way it'd end
Now we're like some enemies, but we were lovers, we were friends
I wanna love you, wanna hate you, one by one I pluck the petals
Till the last one that will hit the ground, my heart will stay unsettled
Would you count the times we broke so happily, and then we patched?
Is that real love, is it love if you push me to the fucking edge?
All the time, I'm hanging here, all along I'm all alone
On my own, wouldn't even start this shit if I had known
It's hard to see cuz I was blind, color blind, completely blind
Three fingers up in the air, read between the fucking lines
Let us make this clean, no more meetings, no more scenes
See me in your escapades, ecstacy or the morphines

I don't care if you care or if you don't care
I swear I don't care and I don't dare
To love you no more, this is going nowhere
I don't care if you care or if you don't care


It don't matter, I mean really, I don't need no drama
Why now you care to say that you love me still, it's pathetic
It's like you came before me to worship me, like it's magic
To come and look at my heart and every crack you patch it
Think about the times I went to school and you were there with me
Think about the smiles you gave, so real, and laughter shared with me
It's all about the times, how we declared it's only you and me
Till the day we fucking die, just like Clyde and Bonnie
Did it happen, it did not, it's the fucking end of us
Because between the two of us, there is one I cannot trust
That is you, it's all your fault, I'm placing the blame on you
I don't care what I'll be called, you're facing the game, just you
I mean, who else is here, none other than you my dear
Oh my God, did I say dear, why the hell am I in tears?
Let us make this clean, no more meetings, no more scenes
See me in your escapades, ecstacy or the morphines

I don't care if you care or if you don't care
I swear I don't care and I don't dare
To love you no more, this is going nowhere
I don't care if you care or if you don't care

I think I made it very clear that it's over between us
I made it extremely clear that we loved each other before
But it's the end of it
It's over
It's over

At least feed the lyrics if you don't wanna take a listen. This song will be one of the songs in my next mixtape. I'm slowly working on it. Please feed this cuz I wanna improve. As you can see, this is Version 1. Thanks in advance guys for real.

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[Solace]

I think you definitely have your flow on lock. Really heartfelt emotion in the lyrics, it's crazy. The chorus ruined this track definitely. Either make a better one or take it out. The high pitch since wasn't done well. Use your real voice! It also definitely doesn't work when you echo the last couplet of each verse. I definitely appreciate the effort of making a whole track with three verses and chorus by yourself. Keep at it bro, I can't wait to hear the finished version.

[M15HKA]

Good effort man
I loved the lyrics ,the beat is good,your voice brought it all down for me. Just keep working on it

[NicoleEM]

Love the lyrics,the chorus is kind of ehhh,the beat is great,but your voice...need to work on it,no offence

[Emadyville]

Basically what others said about the hook.

Your flow isn't bad, the emotion in your delivery is good, but the pronounciation that was mentioned I agree with needs to be worked on. It also sounded like you punched in every 2 bars, not sure but it def sounded like that, which takes away from the fluency of your verses. The content and lyrics were good, your voice I can't say I really like but I can't fault someone for their voice (except on the hook lol), keep working man

[Slim Zaddy]

your flow in the first and the second verse is decent, rhymes were so tight,, you flowed well , dilivery was good though ,, i liked it ,, keeeeeeep it up

[gutawafang]

the beat is unbelievable! but your voice the quality is very bad, and you're pronounciation is very wierd, you must work on that

Thank you Rise. I really really need help with that man.

I think you definitely have your flow on lock. Really heartfelt emotion in the lyrics, it's crazy. The chorus ruined this track definitely. Either make a better one or take it out. The high pitch since wasn't done well. Use your real voice! It also definitely doesn't work when you echo the last couplet of each verse. I definitely appreciate the effort of making a whole track with three verses and chorus by yourself. Keep at it bro, I can't wait to hear the finished version.

Wow, your feed means a lot man. I really appreciate. It helps me improve totally man. I'm trying my best man, especially with pronunciation. Thank you for checking man.

Good effort man
I loved the lyrics ,the beat is good,your voice brought it all down for me. Just keep working on it

Thanks a lot for checking brother.

Love the lyrics,the chorus is kind of ehhh,the beat is great,but your voice...need to work on it,no offence

Thank you very much. I'm trying hard yo.

Basically what others said about the hook.

Your flow isn't bad, the emotion in your delivery is good, but the pronounciation that was mentioned I agree with needs to be worked on. It also sounded like you punched in every 2 bars, not sure but it def sounded like that, which takes away from the fluency of your verses. The content and lyrics were good, your voice I can't say I really like but I can't fault someone for their voice (except on the hook lol), keep working man

Alright man, I guess I'ma change the hook. I might as well re-record the entire damn song with my new mic. I used a 20 dollar mic on this by the way. For the punches part you said, it does help man. I'll take note, cuz I think it will help me improve. Thanks for listening man.

your flow in the first and the second verse is decent, rhymes were so tight,, you flowed well , dilivery was good though ,, i liked it ,, keeeeeeep it up

Yo homie! Man, thank you very much man!