Noble & Explicit - Fading Away

[Tranquil]

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Noble - I Told You So | Explicit - Therapy Treatment
COMING SOON!

This is one of the many collabs between me and Noble to come Im on the hook and the first verse and Noble is on the second verse... Any feedback would be greatly appreciated on both of our verses ect.... i will return the feed if asked

Listen:
http://www.limelinx.com/files/8cc5382cd ... 2f7b9d4e2a

Youtube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9skjhCaOPso



Lyrics:

Hook
This is life, starin' at the stars
Life isn't about the money and all of the cars
Life is what you make it, day by day
You take the wrong step, you'll be fading away
X2

Verse 1 (Explicit)
Can someone tell me what the fuck is going on here
It seems that lately I've ran outta luck, can't even shed a fucking tear
I'm angry at every person that walks my way
I don't know whats gotten into me, I'm cursing like its my last day
I stare right out my window, the window that I stare out
How long will I live for, how many years I got left to doubt
Thinking about all the decisions that I've done in the past
Drinking large amounts of precision, that will quickly put me in a cast
Rain drops hit the glass, and slowly slide down
Even though that I'm alone, I'm up and you can't get me down
But people change, they never stay the same
People take the wrong step, and then they fade away
That's why I'm thankful for what i got, cause I could die any day

(Hook)

Verse 2 (Noble)
See I tell 'em, I tell em', this ain't for the fame
I do it for the fact that some things just really need to change
Its hurts me to see things like this, shit it even brings me pain
But in the future, all of this will probably just be the same
And these days things material, this ain't how its meant to be
And if it don't change eventually, then this life really ain't meant for me
And if you ain't bout change then you won't get a cent from me
And just know that you can't sin for free, I got demons that been sent for me
And my past ways would've led me to my last days
I'm the sole director of my life, and I'm just hoping that my cast stays
But people change, they never stay the same
People take the wrong step, and then they fade away
And I'm just thinking about this shit every fucking day

(Hook)

[youngfire420]

No one checked out our song?

[Tranquil]

Come On!

[youngfire420]

dam guys this was actually pretty dope, the lyrics were great! and flow was right on, I'd have to say I liked noble more cuz you lost it right on your last line, but overall it was great guys, keep it up

Thanks man! Glad you liked it. Be on the lookout for some more collabs between me and Explicit in the near future!

[Terry_M]

The beat is a really nice emotional one. The hook is also a REALLY good idea, maybe it could have used a bit better delivery though. I enjoyed both of the verses too, great message to it.

[dR3]

Damn, I really enjoyed listening to this.

Perfect beat choice, both of you had great verses, and the flows were on point. I honestly didn't expect it to be that good, lol.

Keep it up guys, looking forward to your collabs (unless they're about bitches and money )!

[youngfire420]

The beat is a really nice emotional one. The hook is also a REALLY good idea, maybe it could have used a bit better delivery though. I enjoyed both of the verses too, great message to it.

Thanks man! Be on the lookout for more from us coming soon! Appreciate the listen!

Damn, I really enjoyed listening to this.

Perfect beat choice, both of you had great verses, and the flows were on point. I honestly didn't expect it to be that good, lol.

Keep it up guys, looking forward to your collabs (unless they're about bitches and money )!

Thanks for the listen man! Glad you enjoyed it! And definitely be on the lookout, you'll like them probably!

[Tranquil]

finally some feedback hahaha, thank you all who left feedback, glad you liked it

[Mr.F*ckOff]

Wow !! I was not exspecting this out-come Greate job on keeping it 100% real. Many People can relate to the type of "Change" The track is calling for ! Greate job.

[Jaz]

Idk who's where but here we go.

The beat: I really like it actually. Who produced?

The first verse: The lyrics are straight but the delivery seems a little... not monotone but.. idk maybe that is what it is. I can't think of a better term right now. I think what it is, is that you tried too hard to ride the beat and it made you're syllables seem drawn out and a little boring.

The hook: Same concept as the delivery in the other one. It's alright though.

Verse 2: The lyrics are kicked up a notch here, and the delivery is a little cleaner. This is my favorite verse of the two.

Overall a solid track though.