Snow&Bar - Its All On You Ft. Ashleigh Munn(Prod. By Mart85)

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New track fully produced by mart85


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lfr8AXPw ... r_embedded


comments appreciated

[Xray]

This is a good track for cruising or chilling out to. Great instrumental from Mart, bout time you make some banging beats like you used to, good shit. Your verses were good for what they were, but I feel they lacked a little bit of creativity. By that I mean, it wasn't authentic, you did the same shit 99% of every other rapper does when they make radio friendly songs and it was lacking in terms of being vivid. Be more creative. It flowed good and your delivery was good but you could use a little more clarity in terms of pronunciation.

And perhaps you should of used a less laid back delivery, a more fun/lively delivery would of suited this beat better I think. Same goes to Snow in terms of lyrics, except tbh his lyrics were terrible and your verses were much better. The flow was good though. I like this track man, this is just my view on what could of made this better. Dope hook, very catchy and bounces very well with this beat. Good track from the both of you. Just be more creative with your rhymes. This needed creative punches and it would of left my ass with no complaints.

All in all, good music.

[Mr. Chambers]

Link of feedback

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thanks sajjad, the track was made radio freindly in mind so i know exactly what ya mean, and appreciate the feedback


and sorry chambers i keep forgetting i shall go do that now.

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[Emadyville]

Love this beat, props to mart for always being dope

Didn't really like the delivery at first, but it definitely grew on me and with the hook seemed to sound better as the song went on. The accent made some shit hard to understand, but overall the lyrics sounded pretty good, cool radio track, nice work

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^thanks man