Zu - My Own Planet Freestyle

[mcZu]

Zu - My Own Planet Freestyle

Quality is bad, so bear with me. A written freestyle, of course..

Lyrics:
They, say, whatever floats your boat
But you got no flow; so you boast
But you'll lose for so', it's over
Quit talking for show like Oprah
Both her and you share the same fate.. losing
You'll be So Far Gona like Drake.. moving
Late, you sing, fake, you in my old shoes
I'll have to break you hard like Taio Cruz; face looks
Broken.. hit you more often than like on Facebook
Same hook, the core-is genuine, and you're in
Famine, can you win? My level new.. blessed
You'll get jumped by more people than.. the Devil In A New Dress
Beat, yess, you'll be addressed with a nasty delivery
If you lack, the whole package
Sing with me the ballad, it's my own planet..

Link of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=103701

[mceddie]

Great freestyle man, i like your flow alot.
7/10.
Just need a better mic

[TheOfficialThomas]

Good freestyle woulda been so much better in better quality,.good job

[mcZu]

Thanks for listening guys, appreciate it.

[Tha Q]

well done

i had this playing in the background while I was workin on something


smooth and on point




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[mcZu]

^Thanks, appreciate it.

[Emadyville]

flow was nice, that really stood out, cool little freestyle homie good work

[mcZu]

^Thanks Emady, appreciate it!

[Mr. Chambers]

shit started out pretty solid but at these lines

Same hook, the core-is genuine, and you're in
Famine, can you win? My level new.. blessed
You'll get jumped by more people than.. the Devil In A New Dress
Beat, yess, you'll be addressed with a nasty delivery
If you lack, the whole package
Sing with me the ballad, it's my own planet..

the flow fell way off imo and was really awkward to listen too. i'm used to the accent lol so i could understand you well. your improving tho, mostly on your flow. you still have that newbie delivery, but that comes with more practice.

[mcZu]

^Thanks for the thorough feed, man, appreciate it.

[Mr. Chambers]

you know what you could try doing to help out with your flow. Take some of your favorite songs, and take out the actual rhyming words, and replace them with different multi's. It never helped me for shit, but some people swear by it.