Wiz Khalifa This Plane Cover

[Brownwall]

feedback: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=104707&p=1452102#p1452102

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oc-TqQ_6C9U

Cover of 'This Plane' by Wiz Khalifa
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[_Ironic_]

FYI, on this site, your probably not gonna get alot of listens with a whiz khalifa cover...just sayin

listenin though,

1st dude starts off real slow, flow is semi choppy, could use some work, lyrics were decent, nothin too special

2nd guy dope flow, nice delivery as well, yeah his verse is pretty dope,

3rd guy can't really sense any command in his voice, almost like he's not comfortable. not feelin his verse 2 much. srry


overall: 6.5/10 second guy saved it


check out my thread if u get a chance

[Brownwall]

the third guy, it was his first time actually recording
thx for the feedback still

[GibbzyTrShady]

Okay, imma big fan of wiz khalifa and this beat, is i dno man its epic i love it, so that starts me off enjoying the song to start with,
Now to break it down, first guys flow is pretty nice allthough the emotion/delivery is kinda off could hear it a lil more "enthusiastic" would deffo feel better sounds to much like some chilled out t.i style
2nd guys flow is sick, his delivery is a lil better to and the lyrics ouch' fire, 3rd guy isnt to bad, but dont really feel his voice all that much but got a nice glow going on pretty unique!!
mastering is sick too quality is deffo tight
imma say 7-8/10 more i listen to that hook more i enjoy it,however i feel like you cuda put a lil more effort into the vocals on the hook maybe add some adlibs or something??