Lyricaly it was real good, bit em's style a lil but who here don't lol. My biggest problem was the structure of the song. Was there no hook? Small hook or long hook idk. You got real quite in the second part and didn't mix well with the first. I see your skills u just gotta work on you song construction and mastering yur flow and delivery. Keep practicing with mixing as well.
Keep at it bro, pm me for brats and Colabs!
Feed me as I took the time out to feed u!
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