Sentus- Big Poppa Freestyle

[classthe_king]

Download: http://usershare.net/r7juaxjiqvyz

Lyrics:

(Sentus)
I’m the rawest to spit, about as flawless as it
Gets, so pay more attention or get lost in the mist
Not a coffin exists can keep me locked in its midst
I’ll swim to the bottom of loch ness and sit
Talk to the fish; ask em where the monsters at
Whip that bitches ass too n leave her on her back
I’m only harm for rap but I’m seekin a deal
And won’t stop till I rest in the Elysian Field
Cause even I feel that when the games on the line
You grip the pole tight so I’m keepin it real
You must be mistaken, you ain’t kill the beat
You were so boring on the mic that it’s still asleep
You’ll feel this heat the very second the base slams
A monster on the mic, the nerdlucks from space jam
I laugh at you faggots that keep playin my shit
Then try and talk crap about me but stay on my dick

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http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=105471&p=1472921#p1472921

[Trimss]

Lyrics were cool but what i enjoyed the most was your flow, you ride this beat like a beast.
I joined your facebook page.

[mdemaz]

I joined too..I love your work!

This is all the criticism I could add to this piece:
It's too short.
And there's a bit of distortion at times but no problems really.

[Xray]

This was dope. Only complaints I have is not enough syllabels in some of your lines.
Prolly an old written verse so it's all good. Keep working bro.

[classthe_king]

Thanks guys, that means a lot.

[WakeUpShow]

I really liked the lyrics and the beat choice. But I feel like the lyrics didn't fit the beAt right, like u should have done something more laid back. Breath control was off but this was a good piece overall.

[Mr. Chambers]

pretty decent. Flow is getting better there were only afew lines where your flow really slipped up. But overall it was prolly one of you better flow wise. Lyrics were cool...nothing amazing but i think thats just cuz your still adjusting to the text-to-audio transition. delivery, was okish. still need to practice but like i tell all newer MC's, you just need to practice it'll come with time.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for the feed, I'll keep practicing

[Scrubz]

I really liked the lyrics and the beat choice. But I feel like the lyrics didn't fit the beAt right, like u should have done something more laid back. Breath control was off but this was a good piece overall.

I agree, lyrics were sick but them and the delivery didn't correspond to the beat. I thought your flow was great, same with ur breath control. Joined ur Facebook too. Keep goin hard

[classthe_king]

Thanks man. Appreciate the join.

[B.A.D.]

"I’ll swim to the bottom of loch ness and sit
Talk to the fish; ask em where the monsters at"


I liked it a lot. but you gotta mix it better man, cuz it sounds too harsh for the speakers u know?, get some eq's going, a wetter reverb etc...

I love the flow and the lyrics, top of the class shit. plus like I've said before, you have an excelent presence.

keep at it

[classthe_king]

Thanks, that means a lot coming from someone like you

[NicoleEM]

"I laugh at you faggots that keep playin my shit
Then try and talk crap about me but stay on my dick" <damnn
Short,but considering was a freestyle i liked it.Keep it going

[classthe_king]

Thank you