Scrubz - Walk Alone

[Scrubz]

Great beat man, if you produced it, you have a nice style? may I ask what program are you using, cuz that sounds like NO Fl studio or Reason.... maybe Logic Pro??

you got the ability for the lyrics, creativity and flow... however you need to fix up a couple things, like your voice, needs emotion man. you sound semi-whisper, need to give it all, dont be shy, improve that man. Also, the singed part, need to tune up man hahaha, u sound a bit off note.

I love the whole concept of the track, and you kept it really nice. your mixing is clean, but maybe too dry, try to experiment a bit more. as well on the beat.

great thang man

Yeah logic and gb. Thanks for the feed, appreciate it and will work on my voice. Im still relatively new to raping but have been producing beats for a couple of years. Never had anyone nice to rap on my beats so finally I decided I would. again thanks for the feed and I will take the next step.

[Wreck]

Topic- Good topic
Flow- not bad, a little choppy, fit the song
Voice- not bad, need a little bit more expression in it, but it fit the theme of the song.
Lyrics/Content- Ok, needs a little work, especially for this type of track. Think about it. You're talking to the haters, so you wanna deliver either with a strong message or with strong lyricism.
Hook- Ok. You have the dark theme here, but I think their needs to be more to the hook then the 2 bars in it, cause you repeat em twice. Just my opinion.

overall, not bad song, you have potential as well, and your flow and voice fit the song but I think you just need to pinpoint the things above and work on em a little bit.

[Scrubz]

bumb from the dead

[Steve Spag]

That was pretty dope man, I really liked your energy for the most part and your flow was very dominating. Lyrics were great aswell, the rhyme-scheme is sick and your choice of multi's were good. You rode the beat well dude, can't deny that!


Now that I've heard this I wouldn't feel comfortable taking the beat, so you can just come up with a fresh one like you said. I really like this track, lol.

[CorrosionCover]

Yo i've listened to it and it's nice, the only thing i could suggest is cutting off the singing parts. I mean well... it's another type of gift than spittin and rappers should really avoid it unless they've got a clean voice or a perfect mixing.

Anyway good job dawg, really nice rap

[Scrubz]

Yo i've listened to it and it's nice, the only thing i could suggest is cutting off the singing parts. I mean well... it's another type of gift than spittin and rappers should really avoid it unless they've got a clean voice or a perfect mixing.

Anyway good job dawg, really nice rap

Thanks man, Wouldn't really call it singing, more like humming haha. I'm working on it, this fairly old if u got the time please check and feed my news songs. Self description, Friday freestyle and pass it. Thanks bro.

[mdemaz]

Scrubz is fucking beast..I got blown away from each line.

[Scrubz]

Scrubz is fucking beast..I got blown away from each line.

Thannks man! Glad to hear people feel it. As I said up ther^^^^ check out the newer tracks!