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New Horrorcore WesT Track!

Postby WesTMusiK » Feb 12th, '11, 18:14

Check out the new horrorcore track by me called "Body Collector". Let me know what you think guys! Thanks.

Body Collector: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cwjfF4J-bAs

Link Of Feedback: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107691&p=1514776#p1514776

Lyrics:

Have you ever met a sick fuck, as sick as me?
Disfigure your body with a pipe and twist your knees
Drag you along hard rocks until your heart stops
You'll be stabbed in your eyes when these darts drop

I'll grab a javelin that stabs in the back
It's happenin' fast, open your gash with a slash
Nobody accepts death, well I applaud it
Leave you in a coffin, I make death often

I'll stab you in the back with an axe so relax
'Fore I snap and I grasp your neck and take the breath you have
Don't be an idiot, I'm not fuckin' around
Take this blade and jab it up in your crown

Death to me is, something that is beautiful
I'll take your life and stab you back up at the funeral
Dispose of the body, nah, forget I said that, bitch
They call me body collector, I collect that shit

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[Hook]

You can run, you can hide
But soon you'll find your sick demise
'Cause I'll hunt you down and I
Will not stop 'til you fuckin' die

They don't call me Sadistic for nothin'
I got my blade ready for rippin' your stomach
So you better have a godly protector
Or you'll be a trophy for the body collector

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When I kill, I never kill the same way
It's all different but I always use the same blade
I'll kill in broad day, it don't affect me
Leave no evidence the police can't arrest me

I use weapons that kill in two seconds
The thrill that you bless with is ill and too wreckless
I bludgeon heads, humans, I love 'em dead
Eyes wide open, laying on the floor covered red

Get your face cracked open with a blade that's pokin'
Out your throat so just know that you'll lay flat, hopeless
Choke you with a jawbreaker, leavin' you breathless
You're gaspin' for air, huh, welcome to death, bitch

I'll leave you on a sidewalk, screamin' for some help
I'm a demon so yell, I'll leave you bleedin' from your scalp
No remorse, that word's not in my brain
I'm insane, leave you there bleeding in vain

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[Hook x2]

You can run, you can hide
But soon you'll find your sick demise
'Cause I'll hunt you down and I
Will not stop 'til you fuckin' die

They don't call me Sadistic for nothin'
I got my blade ready for rippin' your stomach
So you better have a godly protector
Or you'll be a trophy for the body collector

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Love me and break me, that's the fuckin' recipe
So why do I miss you? I'm walking on these eggshells
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Re: New Horrorcore WesT Track!

Postby classthe_king » Feb 13th, '11, 06:06

This was pretty dope, better quality could have made it better but that can't be helped. I thought you had dope ass lyrics, I could see myself listening to this. So yeah, I don't really have any complaints except get some better quality but I have that problem too so it's all good.
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Re: New Horrorcore WesT Track!

Postby Tranquil » Feb 13th, '11, 12:10

:worship:

you tackled this subject well man, the lyrics were great! your flow was on point all the way through the song, not once did you fall off, and your delivery was good :smoking:

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Re: New Horrorcore WesT Track!

Postby WesTMusiK » Feb 13th, '11, 20:44

Thanks alot, guys! I'm really glad you guys like my horrorcore shit.

Keep the feedback coming!
Emotions get the best of me, the thought of you stresses me
Love me and break me, that's the fuckin' recipe
So why do I miss you? I'm walking on these eggshells
Hoping for an answer and all I do is beg help
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Re: New Horrorcore WesT Track!

Postby Scrubz » Feb 14th, '11, 01:40

This is pretty dope, flow was great most of the time, you sound like spag lol. Multi's were pretty good aswell. nothing really to complain. I think you didd over do it with that screaming sound effects a tad. But this was a solid track!
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Re: New Horrorcore WesT Track!

Postby mdemaz » Feb 14th, '11, 01:53

I just came and gave birth 12 times.

The energy was amazing...
Awesome layering..Multis left and right and hints of storytelling.
Great hook and beat.
4.9/5
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