Mat Demaz- Real Life Shit (Prod. By Mat Demaz & Demoniac)

[mdemaz]

Lol...
More shit.

LOF:
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Lyrics:

Yeah real life shit just people just don't know about the times
that you gotta suffer and struggle through life
and all the hardships we all face people just don't know
ayo

(Chorus)
Little ghetto boy playing in the ghetto street
what you gonna do when you grow up and have to face
responsibility

I'm mad as fuck
wanna kill cunts
fucken pissed off fuck
I hate people that drive cars fuck you
dad moves out of the family house and in a housing commission flat
with someone twice his age in late 2008
leaves me and mum alone
I'm not supposed to feel bad hey
meh I don't even care
least dads not beating mum up everyday
drunken arguments haunt my memories
hungry jacks from mid 2007 to early 2009 I had enough and went
postal
was hard done by went berserk
that was about the time I snapped
and no longer gave a fuck
gotta face life head on and try not to get stuck
things just keep getting worse while I'm fighting
to keep the love
that's real life shit man
sometimes you just gotta keep going

(Chorus)

everyday is another drama it must be karma
but I didn't did anything wrong mother
I cant help the way I feel now
so negative why did I let this demon live
I wish I could be happy and be with a girl
but It's so hard coming to grips
with the fact I
may be done with trying to be like
those other guys and focus on music's
delights
trying to fight with my mind I just wanna be happy
but happy people seem to be unhappy for some reason
that makes me feel crappy
map the way to heaven cause i want out of this hell
it's a bit hard keeping a level head when your
only friend is dead and you got bills to pay and work
a job you despise and dread
your're a vet but you feel like a noob
you want out but you don't know what to do
maybe you should try to improve your life's perspective
instead of feeling doom and gloom
I'm recovering

(Chorus)

life was hard but finally I have a grip on reality
the last 5 years have been an illusion
delusion of whats been brewing
stewing in
this ruined glooming city but its all good now
I'm out of the hood now doing what I should now
don't know how to put this
I should flip this negativity on its back
stop this crap and walk down this road
look ahead not in the past
move on from my suffering make new friends
and stop exiling myself
and try to be wealthy
and melt this thieve I call greed
become talky and walk free through this torment
that haunts me
try to spawn glee and improve myself
doctors working on my recovery
its just real life shit everyday
its just another struggle another murder another break-in

(Chorus) 2x

[CorrosionCover]

"but you feel like a noob"

You could say nothing despite those 5 words and I would love it haha

But seriously, not bad, the chorus was quite nice. You should speak a little louder or mix it a little better becouse you sounded a bit quiet comparing to the beat for me. You still got some things to work on (I mean rhymes) but well ... me either so thumbs up

Maybe I will drop my first song soon ...

[mdemaz]

Lol...I was aiming for delivery then rhymes at that time...
I managed to slip in some multis at the end but was I was feeling the song too much to make it technical..

Fuck yes, drop your song!

I'll feed the minute it drops.

[CorrosionCover]

Haha i didn't mean it's lacking a multies or sth. I mean i'm not techbitch that will bitch about bitching over multies. I use multies but i don't really say "YO MY ZUNG IS BETTUR THAN YO BECOUZE I GUT MULTIEZ". I wouldn't even give a shit if a song had no multies and still sounded good ( I think that's hard tho lol)

What i meant about rhymes is that they should be less chaotic, sometimes i had a feeling that you tried to rhyme words, but they didn't rhyme.

Or maybe i missed it becouse the written down lyrics stucture was hard to read.

Don't stop composing !

And about my song :

I struggled badly to find a beat. Finally I've found one and I wrote like 3/4 of work. Then I was listening to Eminem and i felt like "Fuck this is wack !" (about me not Eminem lol) and i changed like half of my work. Then i've felt that beat was not fittin' and I've changed it too. Then again i've changed like half of my work. And now i'm like 3/5 through my work lol. (Still want to bring different flow for last part because first part is sounding like fucking "Square Dance" lol)

[mdemaz]

I usually just write down what ever comes to mind for lyrics..I don't use bars or anything...Maybe I should..

[WesTMusiK]

I liked the flow in it, and the hook was nice, too.

BUT

The quality for me anyways, really doesn't cut it. There was a lot of forced multi's in here and you really need to work on your energy and voice behind the mic.

But then again, no hate here, it's all love. Just putting my two cents in. I'm not saying that you're bad 'cause you're not. You just need work.

2.5/5 for me. Keep it up. I wanna' hear more from you, homie.

[mdemaz]

Thanks for the feed bra...
I agree with you totally about my poor performance..
I'm only just starting to get back into the swing of things...
I used to have huge energy but now I'm trying to get it back is all..
I thought if I did a sorta of 2pacish flow It would suffice but alas it didn't..

Sometimes I used to shout lol.. Instead of the boring mono-tonal flow..
Multis are hard to add to storytelling and making them seem natural...Sometimes you gotta find the right moment and it just hits you like a bolt of lightning.

Anyways thanks for that.
You beat your ass I'll be putting out more shit..I'll take your advice and put more energy in.

[Scrubz]

I usually just write down what ever comes to mind for lyrics..I don't use bars or anything...Maybe I should..

Yeah u really need to start writing bars, it keeps everything nice and neat and in order. plus down the road you can throw in a more complex rhyme scheme and keep building from there. It's very helpful. I thought the track was alright, alot of forced lines which broke the flow. The quality is not very good, you need to prob layer and/or back your voice, you will notice a dramatic improvement. Just use this as a steping stone, and learn from mistakes. Easy as that! keep it homie.

[mdemaz]

I used to layer all the time lol...And do adlibs and shit...
Now I don't bother chorusing the vocals so they sound less robotic..Oh well I guess I could try that on the next track.

[Scrubz]

I used to layer all the time lol...And do adlibs and shit...
Now I don't bother chorusing the vocals so they sound less robotic..Oh well I guess I could try that on the next track.

I record low, and layer for a fuller sound, just copy and pasting and panning each of the tracks.

[mdemaz]

Oh I see...
There's heaps of software that can simulate that effect though for the lazy producer.