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Postby mceddie » Feb 14th, '11, 22:29

http://www.usershare.net/4uo56tzv5jrt

just used a free beat i found online for a verse i wrote that i wanted to lay down.
any comments greatly appreciated!



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Re: Why

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 14th, '11, 22:42

Nice, I have this beat too somewhere in this massive folder.
The quality is bad man, no other way to say it, you need to get in a real booth.
Your lyrics though, are actually pretty sick, and the flow is pretty enjoyable although it's kind of choppy at parts but I know you're still getting used to that side of things. Pronunciation was pretty solid and your voice tone/emotions seemed spot on.

Keep at it dude!
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Re: Why

Postby mceddie » Feb 14th, '11, 22:43

Steve Spag wrote:Nice, I have this beat too somewhere in this massive folder.
The quality is bad man, no other way to say it, you need to get in a real booth.
Your lyrics though, are actually pretty sick, and the flow is pretty enjoyable although it's kind of choppy at parts but I know you're still getting used to that side of things. Pronunciation was pretty solid and your voice tone/emotions seemed spot on.

Keep at it dude!
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thanks man, i have a really good mic, i just fucked up on the mixing of the vocals cause i rushed it :facepalm

i appreciate the feedback man :b:
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