Explicit - 20 Bars
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Explicit - 20 Bars
by Tranquil » Feb 16th, '11, 16:37
Last edited by Tranquil on Feb 17th, '11, 10:42, edited 1 time in total.
Straight jacket with a hundred eight brackets, and a strap that wraps twice around my back, then they latch it!
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Re: Explicit - 20 Bars
by preest » Feb 16th, '11, 21:07
Nice, not a bad track! the lyrics were cool, flow maybe could have been a bit better I could hear you reading it off the page in the flow but it didnt really matter, overall it was a nice track and a good addition to the TRshady Audio Stage, keep grinding bro!! 
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Re: Explicit - 20 Bars
by Scrubz » Feb 16th, '11, 22:19
LOve your flow, and yeah herd the hick ups the blue print part was the worst. But this had my head bobbin, really feelin this. lyrics were cool. Keep it up homie! 4/5
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Re: Explicit - 20 Bars
by Tranquil » Feb 17th, '11, 07:32
@preest - thanks bro, and i was thinking about re-recording it and fixing the words i didnt pronounce properly but im to focused in recording me EP/Mixtape so yeah, thanks for the feed tho 
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