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Brutality (Snippet) - WesT

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Brutality (Snippet) - WesT

Postby WesTMusiK » Feb 18th, '11, 02:55

Should I finish this song? Haha, let me know what you think guys!

Brutality (Snippet) : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Alzv0na-DJ0

Link Of Feed: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108251&p=1521000#p1521000

Lyrics:

I'll light a fuckin' ciggarette and stick it in your eye
Leave you in a state where you just wanna' die
Break all your fingers fuckin' one at a time
Make you look like a bitch, sittin' there cryin'

Coughin' up your blood, begging me to quit
I look at you blankly, then I slit both your wrists
Put little hooks in your back and hang you by your skin
Until the hooks break and then I do it again

Beat you with a brick until you're fuckin' face caves
Watch you convulse, and then I'll break both legs
You think that you're dreamin' so then you start assumin'
That I'm a fuckin' demon that took form of a human

Witness the sadistic misfit that's different
Leave you there twitchin' and bitchin' while I'm switchin'
You're fuckin' veins with a patient who has aids
Surgically and carefully, I'm so calm with my blades

You start to pray hoping God will come save you
But if there was a God, you think he'd let me take you
Into my basement, get your body spaced out
Get my blade in my hand to take your brains out?

No, didn't think so, so stop with all the Jesus stuff
It's not saving you, pretty soon, you'll be in pieces of
Perfectly measured and severed little morsels
I'm anything and everything but a fuckin' mortal

Anything that crosses me, I hit with high velocity
Nobody's the boss of me, I treat you with atrocity
You wanna talk shit, I'll rip out your tongue
Now you have nothin' to talk with, forget it, you're done

I'm cutting off your eyelids so you can get a close view
Of me killing everybody who knows you
You say "fuck you", you wanna talk shit? wait
Tell me if you like the taste of this toxic waste
Emotions get the best of me, the thought of you stresses me
Love me and break me, that's the fuckin' recipe
So why do I miss you? I'm walking on these eggshells
Hoping for an answer and all I do is beg help
- Ellustrate
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Re: Brutality (Snippet) - WesT

Postby mdemaz » Feb 18th, '11, 03:01

Yes please.
Finish it.
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Re: Brutality (Snippet) - WesT

Postby Scrubz » Feb 18th, '11, 06:23

This was pretty good, I'm guessing all the stuff u been releasing is all from the same tape? Your delivery seems the same on all ur recent tracks.

And you should finish it cuz the beat is to epic to waste lol.
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