Solace & DerdyPK - Disintegrate (Edited)

[gutawafang]

Didn't feel it. Flow is off a lot of times.

Lyrics weren't good. I expected it to be more powerful because of the title. It lacks power. Sorry, I didn't like it.

I'm not the one to hate on criticism but I'd like to argue with you that the flow wasn't off.

Hey man, I take it back. I listened to it for about twelve times last night. It's muhfucking good flow man. It's very unique too. But I didn't like the switch of flow when PK came in man. Didn't blend well. Didn't match. But yeah. lyrics were'nt awesomely good man.

[classthe_king]

Didn't like song.



Listened to it 12 times.

[Solace]

Didn't feel it. Flow is off a lot of times.

Lyrics weren't good. I expected it to be more powerful because of the title. It lacks power. Sorry, I didn't like it.

I'm not the one to hate on criticism but I'd like to argue with you that the flow wasn't off.

Hey man, I take it back. I listened to it for about twelve times last night. It's muhfucking good flow man. It's very unique too. But I didn't like the switch of flow when PK came in man. Didn't blend well. Didn't match. But yeah. lyrics were'nt awesomely good man.

Lmao it's all good me and PK wrote this in literally 10 minutes, peep the new version if you want.

Lmfao@Class

[Tornado]

Beat has a dope trippy feel to it

Sol, if you had a flow that didn't stop start in places and delievery didn't sound bored, this wouldve been a good verse. As a whole, it just sounded monotone and uninteresting, once you develop that shit'll come dope.

PK, was good, but i kinda felt just as the verse was starting, you kinda ran out of things to say, woulda been good to hear a longer verse.

Old Version's Mixing is way better although in both versions some overlays were slightly off

[Solace]

Sol, if you had a flow that didn't stop start in places and delievery didn't sound bored, this wouldve been a good verse. As a whole, it just sounded monotone and uninteresting, once you develop that shit'll come dope.

True man thanks for checking it

[B.A.D.]

hahaha holy shit that was awsome
hahaha damn!... now, this is what I call a pleasant surprise.

I listened to the new version btw.

first of all, the beat.... Marvelous, could be one of the best beats I've heard in a long time, where the fuck did you got that from??? its fucking amazing.

btw, solace, if this is one of your first verses, then I'm amazed. the first thing I noticed is how fucking clean the quality is. damn, nice set up you got going on, maybe a little over volumed, but nice sound. then umm, u know how to keep up with the flow, the lyrics are hot, everything sounds smooth and un-forced, technically its great and I also like the creative parts u added, like the effects and the echoes and all that which helps making it more pleasurable to the ear. The only thing I can really tell you is to switch up the way you do it. develop like a unique flow or style, make something to differentiate you from the rest.

PK - lol, I like the delivery, and your flow is strange but works well, very different and yet fits 100% perfect with the beat and the concept. I also like the quality of your verse. the only thing is like Tornado said, looks like you ran out of things to say and struggled a little bit on what to write hahahaha, made it sound funny but still, maybe could be a longer verse, idk.

either way, this track was fire, and if this is one of solace's first attempts, he should be proud. good job

[macdaddy019967]

just listened
good job my niggas

[Vettori]

HAAA that beats Diiiirty........

Wish it didnt have the sample..but Doesnt ruin it.

Lower your vocals. turn down your mixer too if you use ones..

haha your writings good, Your recordings gettin better..
You need to Become more comfortable on tha beat homie.
I can hear your reading.

Derdy You tried fittin more words into some lines then you should have...But Overall you guys did ok..

I definatly think You guys can do better.... Work on your mixing...

[Solace]

just listened
good job my *****

You probably typed that while fucking 3 of the worlds hottest bitches.

hahaha holy shit that was awsome
hahaha damn!... now, this is what I call a pleasant surprise.

I listened to the new version btw.

first of all, the beat.... Marvelous, could be one of the best beats I've heard in a long time, where the fuck did you got that from??? its fucking amazing.

btw, solace, if this is one of your first verses, then I'm amazed. the first thing I noticed is how fucking clean the quality is. damn, nice set up you got going on, maybe a little over volumed, but nice sound. then umm, u know how to keep up with the flow, the lyrics are hot, everything sounds smooth and un-forced, technically its great and I also like the creative parts u added, like the effects and the echoes and all that which helps making it more pleasurable to the ear. The only thing I can really tell you is to switch up the way you do it. develop like a unique flow or style, make something to differentiate you from the rest.

The beat was looped from Spoonfull's "You". I'll link it to you if you'd like. I record with a literally $19.99 dynamic microphone so I'm surprised it sounds decent. I'm glad you think it's good, that means a lot coming from an audio head like you. It's probably the 4-5th I've recorded? Thanks for peeping it brother

HAAA that beats Diiiirty........

Wish it didnt have the sample..but Doesnt ruin it.

Lower your vocals. turn down your mixer too if you use ones..

haha your writings good, Your recordings gettin better..
You need to Become more comfortable on tha beat homie.
I can hear your reading.

Yeah I never really realize how loud the track is until I save it all then I listen to it and the vocals are loud as fuck. I'm re-recording this same verse until it's perfect and has replay value, just saying. And yeah, I was reading. It'd be easier to deliver if I wasn't I guess. Thanks for looking out Vet

[Vettori]

It's also good to record Blueprints of your music...Even if its shitty...Listen to it till you learn it...then Lay it your best in the booth....When you record...That song will be around Forever...Put your all in recording that one time..Every other time you spit it...You can be lazy but When its gonna be a song...Work Hard.

[Solace]

True man...Thanks for all the feedback and help