Broke Me (Feat. EvolXYZ) - WesT

[WesTMusiK]

Check out the new song featuring the homie Evol (Had this name WAAY before Space Bound) from XYZ Recordings. Let me know what you think, guys!

Broke Me (Feat. EvolXYZ) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVw1eDww43o

Link Of Feedback: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108694&p=1535933#p1535933

[WesTMusiK]

Come on, guys! You're sleeping on a dope track! Give me some feedback, here.

[Scrubz]

Overall this track was good, u guys kept it flowing, I dug the lyrics and the whole subject matter. It was on point. Hook was above average as well. You both are getting to be pretty good writers, props.

Things I did not like:
Your delivery seems to be the same on all the tracks I listen to, it's not bad, but I would like to hear versatility.
You need more emotion, the second guy had it. Not talkin lyric wise, but the way you say it, needs mor conviction.
Props for the other dude for not punching in but his loud breathing in the mic annoyed me.


Good track man, I like this alot. One of the better tracks I herd from ya. 7.5/10

[WesTMusiK]

Overall this track was good, u guys kept it flowing, I dug the lyrics and the whole subject matter. It was on point. Hook was above average as well. You both are getting to be pretty good writers, props.

Things I did not like:
Your delivery seems to be the same on all the tracks I listen to, it's not bad, but I would like to hear versatility.
You need more emotion, the second guy had it. Not talkin lyric wise, but the way you say it, needs mor conviction.
Props for the other dude for not punching in but his loud breathing in the mic annoyed me.


Good track man, I like this alot. One of the better tracks I herd from ya. 7.5/10

Yeah, I get the emotion thing. I don't want to make excuses but this was about something that happend recently and I was really drained of emotion.

But thanks for liking it, homie!

[Solace]

I think this is pretty good.