Jay Tunes Rapper (Check?)

[Jay Tunes]

Rapper here, i've been a member for a minute! But I forgot my password...

anyways check me out, I stopped rapping and I'm tryna get back,
this my latest, nothing special.... just a quick verse I did with some friends online

http://limelinx.com/files/c5619703699d69fc058483469b5dd2dc

GREEN GOBBLIN - Mykill, Jay Tunes, Mc Crary, Tha Professor(?)

Preciate the feedback, and don't worry if you don't feel (my verse), I'm getting back on my grizzzy and about to hit yall with some fire soon



FEEDBACK : http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108591&p=1537020#p1537020

[classthe_king]

Link of feed

[Jay Tunes]

done, . My bad. funny part is, I was the one to come up with the idea of feedback to post your own music, but it was on another forum.

[Vettori]

turn down ur vocals a bit, work on your multi's and concepts.

the second guy had a lazy flow. but worked.. Definatly hope to see you guys bring it more.

third guy knows what he's doing,, slow down your words..and anuciate better, make your bars stand out more....sounds one toned

4th again quality is the issue, Fixing that will make it more enjoyable to follow along,,,its the one thing hurting your preformance

Cool song

[Jay Tunes]

yeahh, i didnt master this....
and the second guy is me... tryna bring it back together

yeah the last guy, i didnt like his quality either, but he said u mastered it wrong, idrk i dont know him. But I think the 1st guy had the best verse...


anywhoo thanks for the feed bro

[B.A.D.]

lol @ you forggeting the password, good thing u got it back lol

I heard the first song

the beat is nice. good anthem type song, I'll only review your verse cuz I dont know the rest of them dudes. the hook sucks tho haha, dont like the voice. damn son, u got a nice flow, style is cool aswell. the quality sounds diferent, not studio, but good, maybe volume a bit too loud, but very listenable. what did you do there? nothing sounds familiar, but I like the sound.
yeah man, good verse, high replay value.

its hard to feed on this kind of songs, but let me know when u drop a solo track, I'm interested to hear that.

plus, cool name. Jay Tunes

[Jay Tunes]

yeah i plan ondropping suttin nice, good quality nd ima master it but im jus waiting bc it might be a collab and im testing for the state in school so i gotta focus but im dropping sum solo soon, thanks for the feedback

[Jaz]

A little iffy on this one.. could definitely use some work. Third was my favorite. Keep working at it though, and of course it'll get better.

[Jay Tunes]

good looks checking it out lol

[Mr. Chambers]

sick ass beat

1st guy kinda sucked...really boring tbh......
2nd guy...has potential but the flow is all over the place. lyrics were cool...quality was really bad lol....
3rd...was easily the best out of the 3, but it wasn't nothing amazing.....but easily the better so far...
4th....wow quality is terrible...but other then that seems like he'd be pretty decent. his flow needs work...but i think he has the most potential.

[Jay Tunes]

^spam wtf?

& preciate the feed. again, this aint my best just wanted ya to hear me
putting out suttin new soon

[Scrubz]

sick ass beat

1st guy kinda sucked...really boring tbh......
2nd guy...has potential but the flow is all over the place. lyrics were cool...quality was really bad lol....
3rd...was easily the best out of the 3, but it wasn't nothing amazing.....but easily the better so far...
4th....wow quality is terrible...but other then that seems like he'd be pretty decent. his flow needs work...but i think he has the most potential.

This, your the 2nd guy I take? Not bad, deff got potential. Gotta keep your flow steady through out the whole song. I wanna hear a solo track. keep at it