Mykill ft Jay Tunes & Noble - Move It

[Jay Tunes]

quick verse i did for my homie mykill.. this is a song for his mixtape i think.. check it out, im the second one, but check erryone out! appreciate feedback even if it's not your "cup of tea" hehe still tryna get back on my grizzy, thanks!




LISTEN/DOWNLOAD:
http://limelinx.com/files/8b800e6bd061a15f9f3ee0a1934f5e22




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[Scrubz]

First guy: Not very good. Decent voice but his flow and delivery needs work. Tried to fit to much into some places. Very choppy and very generic. Rhymes were ok, lyrics were boring. His energy was pretty good tho. He has poetical just needs practice.

Hook; Boring and not creative.

2nd guy(i think its you):Flow was great Delivery was good as well. Had some nice rhymes but the lyrics weren't meaningful. Got a alot of skill but i think your wasting it on songs with no real meaning. I mean i get it, girl move it drop that ass, back it up lol i get it but its been done 1000 times before, and any shitty rapper can do that lol. dont take it the wrong way because i do think your good, but i think you can shoot for better song wise.

3rd guy: had a good flow and delivery, decent rhyme schemes. But again think the lyrics are lame and generic. Just another copy cat rapper like whats out today tbh.

So all in all I think you should try to break away from the generic punch-lines, songs about swag and pimpin hoes lol. I know its not ur song ur just featured on it so you dont have the choice of subject matter but i am really interested into hear you on some meaningful type shit. Your good dude and would like to do a track if you got the time , private message me hommie!

[Jay Tunes]

i feel you scrubz !!! thanks for your real feedback.
trust me i do write real shit, the first track i dropped after like 6 months of no rapping was pretty meaningful, but i felt my delivery was too melllow and type weak and i forgot how to master so the volume is mad low... but i think i might just post it up, with lyrics just so yall can see my real shit

other than that track, right now im working on another track thats real shit... but im tryna find a beat that really fits... i use to dispise hearing ppl only rap about cars hoes and shit like that... but ive realized its so much easier... and since ive come back, i think im trying to take the easy way out and write shit like that... i dont like it. i mean i think one of those tracks every once in a while is not bad, i mean theres a big audience that just want the catchy shit with no meaning... but i do enjoy writting more real shit... so i hear you man. promise any theres not gonna be a track abt hoes, money and shit like that for a minute, unless it's a verse i do for someone..

im about to drop that old song i wasnt feeling
thanks once again, i really understand what you;re saying....
and collabs, man I'm down....!

[Scrubz]

i feel you scrubz !!! thanks for your real feedback.
trust me i do write real shit, the first track i dropped after like 6 months of no rapping was pretty meaningful, but i felt my delivery was too melllow and type weak and i forgot how to master so the volume is mad low... but i think i might just post it up, with lyrics just so yall can see my real shit

other than that track, right now im working on another track thats real shit... but im tryna find a beat that really fits... i use to dispise hearing ppl only rap about cars hoes and shit like that... but ive realized its so much easier... and since ive come back, i think im trying to take the easy way out and write shit like that... i dont like it. i mean i think one of those tracks every once in a while is not bad, i mean theres a big audience that just want the catchy shit with no meaning... but i do enjoy writting more real shit... so i hear you man. promise any theres not gonna be a track abt hoes, money and shit like that for a minute, unless it's a verse i do for someone..

im about to drop that old song i wasnt feeling
thanks once again, i really understand what you;re saying....
and collabs, man I'm down....!

Yeah ur right every once and a while is fine, or like a single on ur cd an shot like that. And it is easier to write and can really get you goin and flowin when u starting or getting back into things I agree. I will check the new song in a lil but for now pm me ur email so I can send u some stuff to collab on.

[Tash8]

is this dubstep?

anyways, i wouldn't mind this music when i was partying..beat is cool

the first guy was ok, didn't sound to fluid...second guy was better lyrics were better..third guy was the best i like the flow it was very smooth.

not bad, would probably enjoy it drunk.

[_Steven_]

Is this the kid Coleon roasted on LWHQ? lmao

[Jay Tunes]

mind giving some feedback bro? lol