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MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

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MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 20th, '11, 20:41

Again, for those who ain't already seen on Facebook...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... D=10416897

LOF; viewtopic.php?f=38&t=109700

Leave Feedback Please & Thanks For The Plays!
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Re: MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby Scrubz » Mar 20th, '11, 22:35

This shit is good man, just my type personally. From the beat to the lyrics and subject matter. Flow was great, only a few hiccups. Lyrics were super dope and so was the elivery. I loved the "procrastination" part. And the no hook fit pretty well imo.

Great stuff man :worship: , is this on the cd?
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Re: MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby Tash8 » Mar 21st, '11, 01:56

i really enjoyed that second verse, first one was ehh but second was raw...it's missing a hook, i think you realize that haha but maybe you did it on purpose but it feels a bit empty needs something...even if it's just a few bar hook
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Re: MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 21st, '11, 15:30

Thanks for the feed guys, glad ya'll are liking this track, it's climbing pretty fast on Soundclick!
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And yes, of course I noticed it lacks a hook. I originally wrote something to it but wanted a female signer to sing it but our schedule's were too hectic to get it done so I just left it empty purposely. I actually kind of like it this way now since I've never done something like it before, but it's not something I'm gonna get used to doing, I loveeee me my hooks!

Oh, and no Wasnut, this is not on the CD, as you know that will be all exclusives! NO TAGS AT ALL!
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Re: MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby Mr. Chambers » Mar 22nd, '11, 14:37

ok i'm going to say this, not to be a dick, but in hopes you think of it alil in the future.

every time a beat kicks in that's your song, i can hear you already on it. and in some cases thats good, but in this case it is not. cuz you hardly ever switch up. i can hear your flow, delivery, and at times even the lyrics your going to use for it, and it really does take the enjoyment away all together. now i have listened to you for like 2 years now, so i have a bias over i guess "new listeners" you'll pick up via itunes and soundclick. but at the same time if you don't start trying to change up, they'll start to notice it also. and i mean that's just my opinion, you might want to keep doing that, but i don't think you'll advance past your core fan base.

the song overall was actually pretty good. and i can't really pick out anything that's "technically" wrong with it. but like i stated above i heard the beat kick in, and i saw instantly where it was going. but like i said that might just be me and my opinion.
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Re: MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 22nd, '11, 14:55

Thanks man for the honest feed, I could see it coming just like you could see my rhymes coming but it's all fun. I suggest you check out my new EP when it drops though 'cause it really is pretty different, for the most part. I don't think I'll ever have a problem with my fan base like you think though; people know who I am and I've made an EXTREMELY good reputation for myself and they actually respect me. Most people aren't artists like us and don't care if a few songs sound similar as long as you're talking about something someone can relate to; just some advice.
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Thanks for plays everyone, this song is now #17 on Soundclick!
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Re: MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby Jay Tunes » Mar 22nd, '11, 23:02

Flow - was good, felt the energy.
Lyrics - good, liked the second verse lyrically better tho.
Other - i still think you say some words weird.... idk how to explain it, but im getting used to it, pretty decent song...
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Re: MORE NEW SPAG - "Wait It Out"

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 24th, '11, 03:58

oh this one, yeah... I listened before, is the one with no hook right?

well, the first thing I noticed is that you returned to your funny voice lol. :( I liked better the style you had on supersonic. whats better here is the lyrics and flow man. and the quality as-well, this is good man. I dont like the beat too much tbh. people need to ditch soundclick and start finding people to do beats for a special and determined song or track. otherwise everything just sounds the same.

I loved your lyrics man, the song was really good, shame of the hook tho', after "medicine" I know that u can do amazing hooks. only thing I didnt like was the lack of creativity, the way you enunciate words, and the beat. your technique is perfect. but yeah... keep at it bruva :y:
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