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"Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby Longway » Mar 18th, '11, 20:19

Wassup Trshady.com! Want to introduce you to the most recent piece of work from our family... Hope everyone enjoys! As always any and all feed is needed. We will certainly return the favor

1st Verse -- Lost Angel Of Havik
2nd Verse -- Longway
3rd Verse & Hook-- Joshua Smyth
4th Verse -- Secrets Of Havik

http://soundcloud.com/lost-angel-of-havik/back-up


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Re: "Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby Jay Tunes » Mar 22nd, '11, 00:38

1st - Flow was nice, but quality is not the best which didnt let me hear 100% of the lyrics... but from what i heard, they were pretty good as well..

2nd - Same as 1st, but this guy put a lot of more energy which actually made me bob my head lol :y:

3rd - Awesome hook. best verse so far.... didnt like the "noboooooody" tho .. he can do some nice pace switch ups. i think the speedy gonzales (fast rap) is the best tho he shouldve done it the whole verse :y:

4th - Nice energy, good flow... 2nd favorite verse.


not bad... are yall like a group or suttin?
ps. can you put up the lyrics?
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Re: "Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby Longway » Mar 22nd, '11, 15:35

Hey man-- thanks for peepin -- We are not a group-- Lost Angel and Secrets are part of a group called Havik

Myself and Lost Angel are working on a mixtape together

Lost Angel and Prof are working on a mixtape together

So we just collaborated to make this track. We have another here called Let It Rain if you wanna check that out as well

Otherwise I will post up the lyrics for you in a bit
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Re: "Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby Mr. Chambers » Mar 28th, '11, 18:32

chorus is pretty sick. i liked it. real dark feel.

i'ma just feed your verse cuz i'm lazy now.


i gotta be honest, your verse was prolly my least favorite on this track. it was just too all over the place, and there was times i couldn't understand what you was even saying. work on speaking/rapping more clearly. it'll make your shit more enjoyable.
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Re: "Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby Instant Legend » Mar 28th, '11, 21:35

the hook didnt work for me upon first cycle, however by the second rep of it i was diggin it, and quite a bit actually. the track overall is pretty nice, and pretty consistant in terms of deliveries and vocal production, though i've got to give it up to the first cat on the track, his verse shined really hard imo, and im lovin dudes voice, perfect for spittin


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Re: "Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby SINCERE-MUSIC » Mar 30th, '11, 22:04

very proffesional. How old is the guy on the chorus...if he gets older he will probably sound better.
First verse- Flows dope...not to big on the content...
second verse...too Much energy in a wierd way. Needs work. again contents not amazing
third verse guy kills the flow, some plain lines, nothin that stood out. i think itès your anunciation
You dont say the words with much impact

Dope songs though i can see it gettin played
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Re: "Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby SINCERE-MUSIC » Mar 30th, '11, 22:06

Didnt realize there was a fourth guy, Not bad But he needs to choose his words better..
and work on clarity.....

again guys...not too big on the content...very played..Like money.
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Re: "Back Up" Lost Angel,Longway,Joshua Smyth,Secrets

Postby Longway » Apr 1st, '11, 21:35

Thanks for the feed guys... way better turnout then past tracks so we will look to stay more active here.
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