RiseFromTheAshez wrote:I was gona check out the song but both links are the feedback

I hate tagged beats, dont take it personal.. but as soon as I hear "blahblah productions or blahblah beatz" I automatically develop a hate for the song lol... Im a soundclick racist.
The first verse is really good, I like it, but damn, its sounds very very lupe fiascoish... I feel that it doesnt breath anything new, its well written and flowed, but nothing stands out.
second verse, that sounds real as fuck. my dude nice to hear ya

you should fix up the mixing tho', the verse volume is too low, but your verse was really good man, the flow is great, as well as your lyrics.
the third verse was the best, but only bcuz of the mixing, its better than the rest, and well, this guy actually has a lot goin on, very creative structure & flow, although lyrics a bit basic, the verse is great.
this was a beautiful song man, keep at it
drop more solo songs tho'
rtf?
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