dR3 - Spitfire

[dR3]

Thanks guys, means a lot!

[Raids-God]

B.T.W Thanks for the Shout-out in line 3
1 Luv

[Rapsoldier101]

The lyrics are darrrkkk lol but nice. You had some nice bars in there and I enjoyed the rhyming. Try to tighten the flow up a little bit. Thats one of my only real critiques, good job bro

[VenomBlackViper]

Damn bruh i'm impressed
Great fucking beat, you've got a great voice/delivery that separates you from all the other cliche sounding rappers out there. For this being your first song in English & in a few years the flow is great. The lyrics were also pretty solid, no real memorable lines but they were still good. I'd say at least write & record more, see where it takes you because you have potential.
Now I see why you're a Tech N9ne fan

[mdemaz]

Hey dude, I have never heard you spit before, but now I'm glad I did.
I'm impressed..That beat is really well composed too.

I can't really criticize on much but maybe the timing of the words...And the weird noises..But who fucking cares about that shit.
Great piece.
And considering English isn't your forte...Well..Not much of yours..That was highly impressive.