Tornado: Rewind

[Tornado]

Summary: Can't Record. Song from what was gonna be RAF Mixtape V2. Releasing this and some others. End.

Produced by: AllRounda Productions
Recorded and Mixed by: Yours Truely

I was gonna write lyrics and shit, but it got erased, if requested, i'll up them here.



Download Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?b12n1mdn32wqn6k

Also before i forget Add the FB page if you want (i'm slightly pissed i cant have an original URL because i only have 21 fans and need 4 more)
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Tornado/89428008197

Link Of Feed

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[°[~CHR!$~]°]

u showed some nice starts in flow but then you start extending words...kinda to make it to the next snare and you breaths were all over the place after that...
OHHH! 2nd verse was mad dope.. pronouncation overall improved...
was easy to understand most of it... lyrics were tight but a lil obvious if you know what i mean lol...but its an aite track..

[gutawafang]

Wow. Very good man. The flow could be slightly better. I like the accent. Good one.

[B.A.D.]

lol, I hate that Im listening, I get halfway to the track about to start writing the review and then I click reply and shit stops

you did something good with your vocals here, the mixing is clear. and actually makes it 100% easier to get it with your accent... Hmm, speaking about the accent, are you originally english or just been living there a long time??... I notice stuff on your pronunciation like on words like Selfish you pronounce Selfis, and when you say work it sounds like wog... thats the only thing I could advice you to work on.. cuz your flow, lyrics and delivery have already been improved a TON...

I think this might be one of my favourite tracks from you... great work man

[Vettori]

you need to mesh with the beat better. Sounds bland. Needs more energy, or intensity. Chorus was cool.
things like ....Im a "biiiig" mc.. try not to stretch words, fit a word into those syllable spots. or change the word... work on your syllable game.

cool drop..wasnt terrible

[Tornado]

Cheers for feed all
@ Ax: was born and raised here so i don't know really. Maybe for people who English isn't their 1st language may struggle more seeing as i have a lisp

[classthe_king]

This was a dope track, I really like the style you have. It's that raw, underground feel but it still sounds good. Lyrics were pretty tight and your delivery was pretty good, it just got kind of boring as the song went on, that's my only complaint really. I didn't have a problem with the accent cause of all the Rhyme Aslyum I listen to lol

[Maybe]

Man, your delivery has improved vastly. Everything was pretty good, I really like what you did with this. The lyrics were above average, but not what shines, that's mostly the flows part.

Overall, major improvement and it's actually really good.

[Tornado]

@ Class + Maybe: Glad you both liked it man, appreciate you feed

@ FD: lol shit i remember my outro track i was trying to get collabs on,back in 07, i think when myspace was still popular, ah those days For defo, we'll get shit cracking soon.