GT Ronic -

[_Ironic_]

the hook is gonna be redone, but chyea, u get the idea.

let me know how ya'll like it

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feedback link:
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[_Ironic_]

BUMP!!! quit sleepin!!

[B.A.D.]

Bro, can u put it on youtube or hulkshare... I can't listen to this on zshare:

[_Ironic_]

yeah bro I updated the main post, appreciate the heads up though.

[Scrubz]

you should really just use hulkshare, it's the best for both people who like to download and who like to stream. I will update with a feed shortly.

[Scrubz]

The hook was a great idea but i think it you didnt really hit it. I think it was a little bit you voice and delivery, and the fact it lacked fullness. IT really has great potential.

The verses were straight, not me cuz i dont sell crack and dont rep mid west but still i was interested so props there. Flow was great cant complain, and it went really well with the dope beat. I liked the eminem bit, you fit it in nicely, 3rd verse was my personal favorite.

Hmm cant think of anything else, you pretty much got your shit down pack so theres nothing i can critique. Anything eles is pretty much a matter of taste, keep it up hommie. Sorry for the weak feed lol. Check out my latest and/or my ep if you want. new shit on the way too.

[B.A.D.]

thanks for updating the link bro

man, the beat is terribly mixed, need to be louder cuz your voice overpowers it., your vocals do sound clean and crispy, loving the quality there.

I loved the hook, catchy and interesting, but man, your verses ,I know you went for lyrically, but I actually love how you pull it off, the flow here over-shines on that.

damn man, please fix the beat, I'd love to bump this on my super bassy speakers haha.

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