Toksick - Cold War (Feat. Cayoz - Prod. by Toksick)

[Jaz]

This is the first track I produced and also recorded on, so give me as much feedback on both as possible.. Thanks. It should be the first track on both sites.

www.youtube.com/jaz8899
www.soundclick.com/toksickny




link of feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=112406&p=1602660#p1602660

[SINCERE-MUSIC]

That beats dope, your verses are very Complimentary to the concept. hook i wasnt a fan of, just because i feel it was delivered wrong...but i like the words... Cool shit man check my song im droppin in a minute

[Scrubz]

Beat: nice concept just needs more layers. GOt very repetitive IMO. I don't use fl so I can't really give you technical advice.

Lyrics: verse 1 and 2 were pretty dope, was actually very surprised. Good multis and inners, so nice metaphors and similes as well. 3rd verse was average.

Flow: again verse one and 2 were on point, rode the beat very well. 3rd verse didn't flow AS good, but still was good.

Delivery: didn't really like the delivery in the first 2 verses, sounded like an air head lol. Third verse deft had the better delivery even though the lay overs were off and it brought down the quality of the song especially if you compare it to verse 1 and 2.

Production and mixing: I listened on my iPhone so I didn't get to hear every detail but I did notice the mixing was rough. Gotta fine tune each track while mixing an mastering, it goes along way. It wasn't the best production, then again it wasn't the worst either.

Overall: not bad at all. Quality was the only real issue along with the 3rd verse being below average. 7/10.

You should really peep other people's stuff more often because I see you hardly get any feed. Which is a shame cuz your worth listening to. If you got an hour or so check out my album, much appreciated. viewtopic.php?f=38&t=112054

[Jaz]

Just a heads up, the verse/adlib placement was apparently off on the third verse.. and he's sending me a better mixed version soon.

But thanks for checkin' it out and for the feed guys

And yeah I'll check that album out as soon as I got some extra time.

[Jaz]

is this the same cayoz from the brainstormers?

Oh and yes it is.

[Jaz]

Ok finally got his first sounding the way he wanted it to and re-uploaded to both sites..

www.youtube.com/jaz889
www.soundclick.com/toksickny

Also, be on the lookout for another self-produced track coming within the next couple days called "Nightmare"

[CayozDaBeast]

Track came out cool...had to hurry and send my vocals unmixed since I had to drop a tape this past sunday.

Next collab we do is gonna be on point. Unless u still want that mixed acapella from me?

[Jaz]

Track came out cool...had to hurry and send my vocals unmixed since I had to drop a tape this past sunday.

Next collab we do is gonna be on point. Unless u still want that mixed acapella from me?

Just today noticed this post and the acapella in my messages.. I'll try to get around to redoing it but no guarantees I will.. This was really just a mini promo track so I'm not sure I'm too worried about going through and redoing the youtube video, re-uploading to soundclick, etc.. But yeah I'll definitely hit you up again real soon for another track.

[Instant Legend]

thats a hard ass beat, at first i wasnt crazy about your voice, but it grew on me quickly, youve got nice character in your delivery

im diggin this

check me out

[Jaz]

thats a hard ass beat, at first i wasnt crazy about your voice, but it grew on me quickly, youve got nice character in your delivery

im diggin this

check me out

Thanks for checkin' it out man.. and what would you like me to check out?

[B.A.D.]

niqqa u produced this??
awsome beat.. if its the first you produced it, then fuck Kanye West & Timbaland. you are the shit man lmao.

I dont remember your voice being like that so my guess is that in the hook and verses is Cayoz. he's actually pretti fucking good, reminds me of a deeper Vettori. and he seems to have dominated the style now, he dont need no practice anymore. smooth quality, great content... actually excelent content. I loved his style, someone I would buy an album from, and the beat suits him 100%.. excelent job.

on the mixing, watch out... its good, but could be better, more pro... watch how you play with the frequencies... and get rid of the tags you have at the end. rather annoying trend from producers.

[Jaz]

niqqa u produced this??
awsome beat.. if its the first you produced it, then fuck Kanye West & Timbaland. you are the shit man lmao.

I dont remember your voice being like that so my guess is that in the hook and verses is Cayoz. he's actually pretti fucking good, reminds me of a deeper Vettori. and he seems to have dominated the style now, he dont need no practice anymore. smooth quality, great content... actually excelent content. I loved his style, someone I would buy an album from, and the beat suits him 100%.. excelent job.

on the mixing, watch out... its good, but could be better, more pro... watch how you play with the frequencies... and get rid of the tags you have at the end. rather annoying trend from producers.

I'm on the first verse and also hook actually, my sound has much evolved since Deep Underground. Also there's no tags on this beat so that part of your critique has me a bit confused, haha.. But anyway thanks for checkin' it out and glad you feelin' it bro.

Oh and it's not my first beat, more like fifth or sixth.. It's just the first I recorded on.

[B.A.D.]

OOOOHHHH FUCK LMAO!!!

I heard the Keep Your Head Up song lmao.... @ Me... damn man, why u posted that link of youtube... lmao...

well that feed was for Keep Your Head Up haha

[Jaz]

OOOOHHHH FUCK LMAO!!!

I heard the Keep Your Head Up song lmao.... @ Me... damn man, why u posted that link of youtube... lmao...

well that feed was for Keep Your Head Up haha

Lmao yeah when I dropped this new track it was the front song for my channel on youtube, but I switch them around fairly often.