MDIGS- Shaolin Spartan (NINJA SHIT)

[StoneyLodge]

http://mdigs.bandcamp.com/
give me some feedback on this new song for my group with close homie, me (NaughtyRottenRhymer) and J Corp$e. this new song is off J Corp$e's upcoming The Spartan E-PEE, but you can check out our other songs on here as well.

[classthe_king]

Just to let you know, you're gonna need to feed someone else and drop a link or it's going to get locked.

[StoneyLodge]

I'm aware, i've already doen so 2 times, it was a while ago though since i've posted here.

[StoneyLodge]

Shameless bump.

[B.A.D.]

I know you gave feedback to scrubz, but you NEED to post the link on this thread!

I listened to the song, the beat is wonderfull... u need to fix up the clarity of your words, your rapping too close to the microphone aswell.. hard to understand... also the delivery is boring, work on that too.
I actually like the lyrics, and you have a controlled flow... but you need to work on your overall deliverance.

keep it up homey

[Artille]

Not a bad track, but your quality isn't very good. I would definitely take Big Ax-D's advice, but on the last verse it sounds like it may just be your mic. Your flow was ok, but off at points throughout the song. Kind of inconsistent and lacked emotion. The lyrics were alright overall, but I noticed a lot of whack ones throughout the verse. As if you are worried more about rhyming, more so than what you actually say. The beat was dope, I give it a 2.5/5