Day Dreamin' Freestyle

[Tash8]

l.o.f: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=119194

[BumShiv]

sick shit bro i really like the second verse and the hoes hose line i see some eminem in there I would really like to send some beats that i think you could spit fire over lol keep it up bro.

If you don't mind, can you please feed me ? viewtopic.php?f=44&t=120540

[Tash8]

sick shit bro i really like the second verse and the hoes hose line i see some eminem in there I would really like to send some beats that i think you could spit fire over lol keep it up bro.

If you don't mind, can you please feed me ? viewtopic.php?f=44&t=120540

[Tash8]

did you guys just see that

[classthe_king]

This was really enjoyable, I don't know if you produced the beat but it was great. Your rapping has gotten a lot better. I think it's about time you get some better quality so you can make some really good songs.

[Tash8]

This was really enjoyable, I don't know if you produced the beat but it was great. Your rapping has gotten a lot better. I think it's about time you get some better quality so you can make some really good songs.

thanks man, I appreciate it. I didn't produce the beat. N about the quality, I know whatchu mean but I'm broke

[B.A.D.]

hmm, your voice sounds kinda weird here. very kiddy, Idk takes a lot of maturity from you. I love the lyrics tho, great improvement there. but what always amazes me from you is how creative you can be, in here specially it doesn't matter if there's no hook or bridges, you still do some kind of switches that keep the listener glues in. awsome man... plus lol, I heard my name n kez in there, dopey

yeah, I like how you structured this... When you are mixing, probably try to add a soft-knee compression, but kinda a bit limited so all the downs and ups in volume get fixed, sometimes the quality sounds great, sometimes it doesn't.. idk... good stuff none-the-less

[Tash8]

hmm, your voice sounds kinda weird here. very kiddy, Idk takes a lot of maturity from you.

thx for noticing man, I was changing up my delivery a lil bit and I went with a higher pitched voice, I do understand why you wouldnt like it but i'm just tryin new stuff out..

i didn't mix this at all, i put reverb on the main vocals and that's it..It was just a quick song to work on my style and change up a bit more. One thing I can appreciate from this song is I dont think I sound bored (like a lot of ppl were saying for my past song)

[Scrubz]

not bad...not great. LOL at the tr shout outs. I think once you buys some real equipment it will sound much better. I don't mind your subject matter i just think you can work on ur flow and delivery. Flow wise its a little stop and go on this track, and i agree with ax you sound childish kinda. Your rhymes and multis are good its just the quality that is really bugging me. haha

[StoneyLodge]

Lyrics sound Eminem-ish....but not a bad thing though

[Tash8]

not bad...not great. LOL at the tr shout outs. I think once you buys some real equipment it will sound much better. I don't mind your subject matter i just think you can work on ur flow and delivery. Flow wise its a little stop and go on this track, and i agree with ax you sound childish kinda. Your rhymes and multis are good its just the quality that is really bugging me. haha

fasho man, like i said i purposely went higher pitched, i def do not normally sound like this.. Quality is a piece of shit but what can you do when u are broke...i'll work on both my delivery and flow as always

Lyrics sound Eminem-ish....but not a bad thing though

not gonna lie, i thought this myself, but you know what, people have told me some songs of mine sound like T.i. so as long as i dont constantly sound like em, i dont mind..being influenced on a few songs i dont think is a bad thing.

thanks for the feedback guys

[Tornado]

I know you purposly switched up your delivery but it was annoying, personally. It did sound weird aswell until i read you only put reverb on it so for that, it sounded decent part from the fact the vocals seemed a little quiet. Other than that, it was decent, nothing special though but everything else was decent.

[Tash8]

I know you purposly switched up your delivery but it was annoying, personally. It did sound weird aswell until i read you only put reverb on it so for that, it sounded decent part from the fact the vocals seemed a little quiet. Other than that, it was decent, nothing special though but everything else was decent.

thx man

[Instant Legend]

not a bad joint here, you got some cool lines, and you're riding the beat pretty well (beats sick BTW) - i think the biggest thing to work on is the mixing really

not bad homie

check me out

[Tash8]

not a bad joint here, you got some cool lines, and you're riding the beat pretty well (beats sick BTW) - i think the biggest thing to work on is the mixing really

not bad homie

check me out

Thx man