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Postby Atone » Aug 7th, '11, 05:32

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Re: Atone The Underdog- No More Fun And Games

Postby BumShiv » Aug 7th, '11, 18:47

ummm... your really off beat :unsure: your words and really rushed and your voice is unlistenable for me and idk if thats an effect. your voice and beat and the beat aren't mixed well either. Hope i helped and keep improving :b:

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Re: Atone The Underdog- No More Fun And Games

Postby Instant Legend » Aug 8th, '11, 20:37

you've got some rhymes homie, but that production sounds insanely weird, kinda steals away from your actual voice - not bad, but some mixing work could be invested for sure

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Re: Atone The Underdog- No More Fun And Games

Postby mdemaz » Aug 9th, '11, 06:22

Rushed double-time flow dude, a bit off beat, but other than that, your rhyming was decent.
The beat did sound a bit weird though, but meh.
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