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Postby Phantom » Aug 9th, '11, 10:44

just wanted to share a song i did. full 3 verses on this for once.

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10850062

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Re: Phantom-Heavy Heart

Postby Eedee » Aug 9th, '11, 11:01

Wow. That first verse was awesome. It had awesome flow with some awesome multi's in there. The beat was perfect for the message you were trying to send. :y:

Also, that second verse, near the beginning, you spit like 3-4 bars in one breath. Mad props!
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Re: Phantom-Heavy Heart

Postby Phantom » Aug 9th, '11, 11:11

thank you for the listen! i have hardly any experience writing multi verse songs and its hard for me to match the first verse to the other ones but its what im working on a lot. thanks for the feedback
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Re: Phantom-Heavy Heart

Postby Eedee » Aug 9th, '11, 11:19

Phantom wrote:thank you for the listen! i have hardly any experience writing multi verse songs and its hard for me to match the first verse to the other ones but its what im working on a lot. thanks for the feedback


No problem. I really enjoyed it. I'm going to put up a song on here called "Free Falling" here in a bit, so if you think you could give me some feed that would be great. But just so you know, there's not many multi's in it, I wasn't that good with writing them back then as I am now. It's my first finished track, but certainly not my last.

But anyway, nice work on this track. I really really enjoyed it. Keep it up! :)
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Re: Phantom-Heavy Heart

Postby Solace » Aug 9th, '11, 13:53

As usual, excellent work bro. I really enjoyed the chorus. One of my favorite lines was:

"I'll never give a damn, I wish meant how I said it,
I care enough to remember, how come I never forget it?"

Gonna be bumping it, keep it up.

I'm just wondering, do you have your own producer or some shit, you always find these unique beats that perfectly match you...Who's behind the boards :o
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Re: Phantom-Heavy Heart

Postby Phantom » Aug 10th, '11, 07:43

thanks everybody. solace, i find all my beats on soundclick or soundcloud but i search for hours everyday to find beats that i like. cream, its all done man. most of the songs are on soundclick but some arent. i could email you some of the newer ones that i never released online
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Re: Phantom-Heavy Heart

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 10th, '11, 10:54

Damn, the best mixing and mastering on this site easily. Beautifully melodic chorus, the flow is so crisp and the quality really lets your delivery shine.
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Re: Phantom-Heavy Heart

Postby Phantom » Aug 11th, '11, 02:17

thanks eyespick, i appreciate it
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