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Sentus & Mykill- Fight Dirty

Postby classthe_king » Aug 4th, '11, 23:25

You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Sentus & Mykill- Fight Dirty

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '11, 23:58

The other guy, I won't feed. He just sounds like an amateur Tom Chambers lmao.

Your verse, I really liked it. Though you need to get better with punch ins because whenever you've done them in the past, and in this track, they're extremely noticeable. The flow was kind of awkward at the write lyrics/hide spirits/might hear it part. At one point it was like a run on sentence and it was hard to identify the "hear it" rhyme. At least that's how I hear it, others may have different opinions. Other than that, your verse was well written and the flow was pretty good. Definitely gunna download this, cut it to your verse only and just bump that. :coffee: Keep at it.
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Re: Sentus & Mykill- Fight Dirty

Postby Atone » Aug 7th, '11, 05:29

beat is dope

chorus = 10

i love the chorus, really sounds like somethin i could hear from horrorcore rappers

1st verse is great, nice flow, great lyrics, the part after the verse is creepy as fuck, which i love

2nd verse, dude sounds familiiar, copywrite maybe, idk, but dude has good flow, even tho i swear i'v heard somebody that sounds like him before

overall, i love the song, i'm wanna check out your tapes
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Re: Sentus & Mykill- Fight Dirty

Postby classthe_king » Aug 10th, '11, 20:21

Thanks guys, and Atone...I was on the second verse lolz
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Re: Sentus & Mykill- Fight Dirty

Postby Atone » Aug 11th, '11, 08:59

classthe_king wrote:Thanks guys, and Atone...I was on the second verse lolz


oh shit lol
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Re: Sentus & Mykill- Fight Dirty

Postby WakeUpShow » Aug 11th, '11, 20:50

1st verse, you have a good clear voice for rap but your lyrics could have been better. Great chorus though.

Class, Your flow has improved sooo much. It used to be choppy but you rode the beat well.
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