Your voice was the only downside to this, you sound awkward. I don't know you, or how you talk. Maybe it's your delivery; or just your voice itself. Also, you slurred "syllable" in the beginning, though I'm sure you know that now. I'm not trying to insult you, I'm a beginner in all of this audio recording so I understand you're probably thinking like who the fuck am I to critique you, but it's how I feel.
The mixing was actually fine, I don't know why some people had trouble with it. You spoke clearly too, I could understand your verses without the lyrics. I loved the way you executed this track with the multiple panned vocal layers and adlibs, definitely Spoonfull reminiscent.
The flow wasn't my favourite I've heard, not to say you weren't on beat but it wasn't clear when you were going to clear a certain rhyme scheme and go onto another one.
My other thoughts? Well, you chose a good beat for this diss, I don't like it when people use some extra omgz hardcoar!! beats to diss someone. If you know what kind of beats I could be referring to lol. Pretty chill instrumental. I'd have liked a hook, or at least you talking some shit dissing Scrubz. Also, the written is crazy dope, but you already know that. Overall, you made a good track, definitely has replay value, I'll bump the Faux Pas EP when you release that shit man.
