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Best To Be

Postby l33chie » Aug 15th, '11, 03:22



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Re: Best To Be

Postby Instant Legend » Aug 16th, '11, 02:07

this is pretty solid, i like the rhyme scheme you kick this off with, not incredibly common

rockin a nice little beat here

think your vocal production could be improved, but its not too bad

a little short, thats my biggest complaint lol

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Re: Best To Be

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 16th, '11, 04:31

I'm Digging the flow, technique and lyrics, pretti fucking dope, but I dont like the delivery at all. You sound like running out of breath and its a bit hard to understand you.

Probably try to improve like the actual connection to the music you know??, you already nailed the flow and rhyming. Now try to dig yourself out. What makes you different??

good short verse man :y:

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Re: Best To Be

Postby Eedee » Aug 16th, '11, 07:40

Beat is just simply awesome. Lyrics are great. Rhyme scheme, as said before, at the beginning was insane and not common at all. Love that.

Terrific track, although the audio quality has yet to be desired, but it wasn't terrible! :y:

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Re: Best To Be

Postby RainMan44 » Aug 24th, '11, 22:35

I like the beat, and your flow is dope to be honest.


I like that you don't rely heavily on multies, yet still can make it "good writing"


Good job :y:


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