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I think the chorus was pretty dope. I'm cool with your flow and delivery, and I like your voice. The random overlays in both verses were kind of odd. Consistency in the overlays would have helped. You were pretty clear for the most part, if you could post up the lyrics next time it'd be much easier to follow along with though. It's a pretty nice track in general though, keep at it bruh.
Basically what Solace said, but I think the overlays were alright. Maybe try making a bass a bit louder, but not too much. There was a lot of range not being used.
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Thanks, this is my first time creating a hook, so I was scared how the song might turn out... but I'm glad it turned out the way it did. Thanks for the feedbacks, they really help!