Sentus - Angel's Caw (Feat. Tom Chambers & Solace) (Remix)

[Solace]

No Offense to anybody at all and im not trying to be a smart ass or anything.

but why does everybody on this song sound white? and basically all of yall sound like canadians,plus does sentus have a lisp? *shrugs*

Damn that's some real constructive criticism, your comment is really helpful

Should I apologize for being born and raised in Canada or something? Get out of here lmao.

My favourite verse was the 1st, i wasnt really digging the chorus, mainly just how it was done not the lyrics, but the rest of the song was worth the listen.

Thanks for peepin' Nef.

oh, hmm, I'm not feeling the flow at the begining, sounds to me a bit off-beat. When your pick up starts it get sick. nothing really much I can help you with. you basically hold your game great and prolly had the best verse of the Remix.

yeah man, I liked it Good job

No clue about Coleon not favouring you tbh. Thanks for listening Ax; always appreciated.

[BILI]

Dope track..

[Kez]

Beat is sweet

I got nothing to say really, you all brought it on the verses. The hook's singing wasn't very good though, and the bridge needed more boost. But the verses are on point. I enjoyed it.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i dont wanna be lazy on feeding but basically what kez said...
hook wasnt the ear.catcher it should be....chambers i liked your 2nd verse the most...1st was okay but only okay lol...2nd was above decent..especially delivery.wise
solace your mixing is bothering me a bit..idk its like its too much IN-Beat...get me?
feels like you quite didnt EQ at all..or not right im not sure
but you have way to much Low Frequency in it...i think hmm
dunno if this helps but my EQing handles High,Mid,Low....which i turn down about -0.2dB ,-2.7dB, -3.3dB then again its different on every voice...every recording...but yeah
let your creativity work!

[Atone]

Sentus redid his verse, Tom's verse and hook were kept, and I did a bridge and replaced Emadyville's verse.

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[Bridge] x2
You were perfect with your hateful flaws,
I want to go right back to the start,
You can sing every angels' caw,
Sing it loud enough just to shatter my heart.

[Verse 3: Solace]
I look into the past and I'm seeing every scar made,
I feel my chest as I bleeding to the heartbreak,
I can smile but my mood is doubtful,
What the fuck am I going to do without you?
Sitting here as I cling to my sanity,
And with my dying breath I will sing to my family,
A swan song where the melody is perfect,
The pitch will serenade you 'til my memory is burned in,
Your thick skull, so remember me on purpose,
And with my dying breath I guess I never seemed so worth it,
I bet you never thought it's true that I had cared,
You carried on yourself although you knew that I was there,
Now it's true and I'm aware that I'm left beat,
I spent forever looking for you and you left me,
You stole my heart and you stabbed when it beat,
But that's okay if you ain't happy with me.

Constructive criticism or just "Hey, I (dis)like the track" is fine with me.

you have a few new fans bro

i sent links to some of my close friends that live in Iowa, i'm on skype with my friend Tasha right now, her and and Cousin are jammin to a few of your songs

keep goin man, i'm gonna get you a fan base

[Solace]

So nowww people care to check this track.

Dope track..

Thanks BILI.

Beat is sweet

I got nothing to say really, you all brought it on the verses. The hook's singing wasn't very good though, and the bridge needed more boost. But the verses are on point. I enjoyed it.

Thanks, and yeah the beat is nice. I agree with you on both the hook singing and the bridge; s'all good.

i dont wanna be lazy on feeding but basically what kez said...
hook wasnt the ear.catcher it should be....chambers i liked your 2nd verse the most...1st was okay but only okay lol...2nd was above decent..especially delivery.wise
solace your mixing is bothering me a bit..idk its like its too much IN-Beat...get me?
feels like you quite didnt EQ at all..or not right im not sure
but you have way to much Low Frequency in it...i think hmm
dunno if this helps but my EQing handles High,Mid,Low....which i turn down about -0.2dB ,-2.7dB, -3.3dB then again its different on every voice...every recording...but yeah
let your creativity work!

Mucho gracias on going in depth on the EQ, tbh I don't EQ anything...I don't know how to mix the EQ; I just put Lo to 5 'cause I feel my voice needs some bass in it. Other people don't have that problem with the mixing though, usually it's the opposite but I'll have to figure it out for my own benefit. I think someone should explain what High, Middle, and Low really do and shit...I appreciate you checking it Riz.

you have a few new fans bro

i sent links to some of my close friends that live in Iowa, i'm on skype with my friend Tasha right now, her and and Cousin are jammin to a few of your songs

keep goin man, i'm gonna get you a fan base

Damn, that sounds crazy. Never thought anyone would "jam" to a track I've done...Get me a fan base? Haha but why though? Thanks Atone, glad you liked it.

[Atone]

I'm doin it cuz i wanna see more unheard emcee's get a chance to be heard, everybody deserves a chance to get their music out there,

i just now set up a seperate Twitter account to promote my beats and shit, as soon as i get an extream ammount of followers on that account i'm gonna tweet links to ppl's music pages around here, get people to be heard more

[mdemaz]

Word to ATone, unsigned hype is what we all need..