Nefarious - It Took Forever

[Nefarious]

http://hulkshare.com/87ldds3z5cu9

Verse 1

My past and dreams are all miles away.
I look at everybody and i wanna smile the same.
But if i died today, then i would die in shame.
Because i never got to anything i tryed to gain.
My mind's insane im trying to describe the pain.
Im alive to blame, cry, live a lie and claim.
Whats mine, with aimed eyes, and rhyme to say.
I'll find a way i look up at the sky and pray.
I wanna save my life, if i can make it right.
I wont need your permission i can take the mic.
I rise high up above and i spit the truth.
And im shy, but i love what i get to do.
While you were waiting for somebody who accepted you.
I went ahead and i earned the respect and grew.
You never said it but i knew you were neglected to.
And that would give me all i need just to get me through.

Chorus

I'll do whatever it takes, and i believe in what is right.
It took forever i waited and didnt even see the light.
If i can ever escape, this cuz being me is like.
I was never awake, so i've been sleeping all my life. x2

Verse 2

Im on a mission if i listen and vision, what i was missing.
Whatever it is, i know, i'll be making the right decision.
I live in a fuckin prison of misery no religion.
I pity you, and the god you believe in because there isnt one.
Stuck in a position, i want to be set free.
With every single written but where will it get me.
I barely see a reason to struggle or stay sane.
And with nothing to believe in or love i remain blamed.
For all of it, and i know that today is the same day.
So it's never gonna change, the way my brain waves.
What i go through, isnt really what im supposed to.
And everything your living for is something i dont do.
Youd never understand i see it in your vision.
I've been there before think of the meaning and more, listen.
There's nothing before this, to me and im sure of it.
But i'll get to what i wish for no matter how hurt i get.

Chorus

I'll do whatever it takes, and i believe in what is right.
It took forever i waited and didnt even see the light.
If i can ever escape, this cuz being me is like.
I was never awake, so i've been sleeping all my life. x2

Verse 3

Can i wake up, every single day sucks.
And ive never gave a fuck id rather waste what.
I have, if i'll never get to be myself.
So if you look into the mirror and you see yourself.
Then you were fine and didnt even need the help.
And you agree that its hard to believe you felt.
So ashamed but i take all the blame maintain the flame.
Remain the same, i claim to contain the pain.
And i'll explain, how it feels to find a true goal.
If you giving me your ear's and time to do so.
Would i cry while im saying goodbye to you, no.
My mind is to full of reminder's who know's.
What it would be, see if we can or could we.
See the good in every person is something we should see.
But the bad shows, im in control of my free thoughts.
I've been searchin for the answer cuz noone should be lost.

Chorus

I'll do whatever it takes, and i believe in what is right.
It took forever i waited and didnt even see the light.
If i can ever escape, this cuz being me is like.
I was never awake, so i've been sleeping all my life. x2


Link to feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=126375&p=1761741#p1761741

[neversnooze]

i really enjoyed this song. your chorus were really good compared to your previous stuff.your flow was right on point and wordplay was simple, but works

[mceddie]

wow dude, this is one of the best things ive heard on this site. straight up.

10/10 lyrics
voice 10/10
flow 10/10
beat 10/10
hook 10/10


straight 10/10 bro.

[Trimss]

Wow.. Awesome voice, delivery, beat.

I like it a lot. Good job man.. I really have nothing to say but this.

[Nefarious]

Bump ( im looking for real feed, not people who have just started hating on me in the past few hours )

[BILI]

Bump ( im looking for real feed, not people who have just started hating on me in the past few hours )

Why would they hate on you?


Anyways here`s my feed...1st of all I love it...one of the better songs on TR lately...lyrically its on point...some decent multies...maybe you should try a bit more complex structure,but you still have some complexity and your vocab is .The thing I like the most is the flow...your flow is smooth as it gets...beat is the weakest part of the joint...not only was it weak but I hate it(just my opinion...I cant judge the technicalities since everyone likes different instrumentals, and I`m not even sure if you produced it or what).Now the chorus is what impressed me the most...I fucking love it...it goes well with the beat...its crazy catchy and I love the message that comes with it. I honestly think you have the potential...you have the voice(sometimes people are talented but their voices sucks and it just ruins it),your flow is awesome, you can make a nice hook,etc.... But you do sound a bit like some other internet rappers, so If you can switch the flow from time to time and are not repetitive then I salute you ...but honestly I have to hear more stuff to judge on that...I hope for more from you.

[Kez]

I always liked your shit. Thank God I'm Alive is a song that I just always fucking loved. I know it sounds stupid to keep bringin up a song that is fuck knows how many years old, but that song > *

As for this, I got no complaints. You really make the kinda music I just enjoy. I can't criticise it. I enjoyed it greatly. Though I do think your verses' volumes were surprisingly low.

Still though, good shit. Fuck "detailed" feed, I enjoyed the track, that's all there is to it really.

And yes, I saw the shitstorm that kicked off in his other thread which FreeDoom locked. Personally I aint gonna hate on him cause I like his music as is (and I think from his refusal to claim himself better than me in the thread that he enjoys my shit too, at least I hope), but yeah.

[Nefarious]

Lol, thank god im alive was written when i was 14 and recorded when i was 15, it was also i think my 3rd or 4th time recording and my first ever single since i did the chorus, im gonna be 21, october 8th, so to me that was a long time ago, but i always think back to that song and remember what it did to me and how i felt when i wrote that, and i remember you bringing it up several times in the past, thanks for remembering that for so long, and also yes ive enjoyed listening to your tracks so i cant say anything bad about someone who's good at the same thing as i am lol, im happy that there's someone else who digs this kind of music that i tend to be stuck on, i just love it so much that i cant get away from making tracks like this. i'll release some more like this soon and i have some other stuff thats unlike this, kind of erie and dark, or fast and im all that haha i'll have more up soon.
i'll be looking for some of your new tracks to feed lol, send me them in a message anytime feel free.

i got so caught up with the thank god im alive comment that i forgot what i was even commenting on lol, i forgot to thank everyone else who liked this song, lol forgive me everyone i didnt mean to make it seem like kez was more important than everyone else haha

[gutawafang]

i was literally rapping along to this even though its my first time listening to it. you're freakind dope brother. awesome shit man. keep doing this

[Eedee]

Dude. This is insanely awesome. That flow in the third verse... jesus christ man.

Loved the chorus too.

[Ticalrecords]

daaaaamn this has some crazy replay value. thats the best thing i can say about this song man its really really good. i got nothing bad to say, flow was ridiculous, rhymes were great and delivery was top notch. only one question, is it an original beat? cuz then that makes this song a knock out. major props.

[Nefarious]

It was just a random free soundclick beat like all the beats i use i just downloaded it off allrounda and turned it into something, glad you like it, this is one of my favourite songs ive ever done just because i never notice 1 part that i dont like while i listen to it

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

Nef!...you always impressed me with your drops..
not really sure but i think i heard couple punch ins
not sayin its any bad..just pointing out..hook was mixed PERFECTLY...seriously
wide at the same time heavy/bassy...really really good mixing on the hook....
overall mixing on this track was enjoyable but the hook was pro
lyrically you never fail to impress....flow was also very kool wit me...9.9/10
(only cuz i never give 10/10...doesnt seem right to me )

[Nefarious]

Thankyou very much as always, its very appreciated to get a 9.9/10 from someone who says they never give 10/10 lol, and yeah probably heard a punch in somewhere lol im pretty good at punching in, so its hard to notice when i do it, my lyrics are sometimes quite a handfull to spit all at once, i can, but i would rather punch in whenever im out of breath so i can give the lyrics some more power and emotion, but anyways thanks alot, you must have some good ears to catch things like that haha.

[Tash8]

^ i feel like its ok to punch in when recording cause you're trying to get the best sound, but you still imo got be able to spit fully so when you do it live, you actually can.

anyways this song is masterful, i downloaded it. Yes i know its the same subject matter as most of ur songs but there was something unique about this.. It was the content, incredible flow and just ADHD on the lyrics...like dude you know how many times you rhymed mid sentence? That is some incredible shit right here and i'm proud because i knew you had this much potential from the time Vet introduced you.