by Cobo Black » Oct 14th, '11, 05:59
Its cool you wrote a song about your mom, thats deep.....but come on man, you know your shooting yourself in the foot when you compare yourself to Eminem, right? Before I even hear you, you make me immediately put expectations on you....and then you fall short of them because your not good as Em.
It would of been easier to appreciate had you not done that. Don't wanna knock you down, its obvious you have passion, there is some talent at writing, you delivery wasn't bad, but it wasnt great....I got the feeling you were a little nervous and I think I even heard you mess up on one part..which is fine..it was live and in front of a respectable people.
I would like to hear you to a beat and on your own terms, with no nerves and control over what comes out. I'll reserve my judgment till then. Respect for going out there and going for what you love and again, Im not knocking you...there is talent there.