Mat Demaz- Brainstorm (Freestyle 10)

[mdemaz]

Ok.
Maybe I should stay away from slow beats, but I made the best of the moment.


Lyrics:

You can brainstorm lyrics but you'll never reign supreme
all hail mat demaz the guy that can drop your name b
every time you come around you try to test but fail and cry in a mess
listening in class might be best you love me so die being obsessed
If I was a parachute I wouldn't open up for your shit crew
you're just plain an average rapper not dropping bombs it's truth
I need to clean myself up man and stop doing ash fumes
fuck it slapped a man in the head with a motherfucken vacuum
my life sucks man fuck it I wish the world would blow up
at the mall waiting for whores on a chair screaming yo slut
drinking bottles of rum and coke while I sat on the can
never really fit in I'm vile never had many fans
probably why I'm soo hot when I rip rhymes in my room
um yeah I'm thinking about suicide I might try soon
all my life I've taken shit now I'mma dish it out
new start fresh plate shh bitch don't shout

LOF:
http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=131264

[Ka0t1c]

it was ok freestyle wise, but it sounded sloppy vocally, didn't have much fresh content, but again if it's really a freestyle, then keep at it, you only get better

[mdemaz]

it was ok freestyle wise, but it sounded sloppy vocally, didn't have much fresh content, but again if it's really a freestyle, then keep at it, you only get better

Thansks for the feed!!!!

Hip-hop forever.

Eh..I guess I should take a lot of advice from errbody and upgrade my shit for the next album.
This EP is really me trying to establish a flow, and I think I almost have it.
I gotta make a metal album too now, I'm pretty busy this year..
X.X

[Ka0t1c]

you're doing better than me, most ppl haven't even heard me

[mdemaz]

I gotta add that this is premeditated stuff...So it's written but I don't look at the shit when I rap..
I mainly just recorded myself rapping it and memorize it etc..

Freeverse if you will..A mixture of ideas..

Anyways, bump, I seriously wanna know what you dudes think of the flow, it's pretty new to me trying it.
It sounds good on any beat really, even on R&B or trap/snap.
Which I'll be trying on 11 and 12 tonight.

Once I finally ace the flow, I'll buy the pro studio shit and start recording serious shit.
No more childish crap, I'm over it.
I wised up.

[DƎRDYPK]

flows iight, I can't complain about it. a little choppy but it's still cool
it'll take you some time to perfect it but I believe in you
also it'd be cool as fuck if you recorded on a condenser mic

[mdemaz]

flows iight, I can't complain about it. a little choppy but it's still cool
it'll take you some time to perfect it but I believe in you
also it'd be cool as fuck if you recorded on a condenser mic

Or Hi-Fi dynamic..Those ones are dirt cheap these days..It's just the hardware price that pisses me off..

I'll get it eventually, I just only realize now what true flow is..I never used a real flow before..