Nefarious - I Wish You Knew

[Nefarious]

Ive been holding on to this for a while, its a nice little song.
Sage wrote the chorus but i ended up singing it, insted of him.
Just giving credit where its due.


http://hulkshare.com/uw0kuyto8jeh


Lyrics

Verse 1

If you dont want to know the point of words, then the choice is urs.
Im gonna scream until the meaning of my voice is heard.
I'll never end if i say that i'll start fresh.
Im heartless waiting for the day i get to stay in the darkness.
Im hidden i prefer to always cover the bright side.
A different kind of person i become in the night time.
Im running out of space, im about to replace.
The doubt in my face, ive payed for someone else's mistakes.
So many disadvantages and i manage to keep talking.
Image what its like if your rapping and sleep walking.
Im feeling weak often, trapped in deep thought.
You have to see me, making my masterpiece watch.
And learn, im not concered i'll make it to the top.
Where the term to hot to burn, will mean more.
Everyone will know my spot was earned.
And i wont ever be the one who never got my turn.

Chorus

I wish you knew who i am.
I wish you knew who i was.
Look at the new man i am.
Look what ive slowly become.
I wish you knew whats its like.
To feel this pain everynight.
I wish you knew how it felt.
To fall from heaven to hell.

Verse 2

The only reason that im living is this, cuz i was given a gift.
And if i didnt share it with you id admit that im sick.
With no cure but i never really cared what you thought.
You couldnt even bare the truth talk, i wanna get to where.
I'll be compared to tupac, i reach up in the air.
And then i tare the roof off, so i can guarantee.
That i could hold my own, but dont be scared of me.
Beware ive only sold my soul, i wanna know if i was chosen.
To find a way through, if i wasnt i would hope.
That id try to save you, do you ever measure.
Size of pride, or even open your eyes wide.
Insted of a lie to stay true, i figure it doesnt matter.
To some of us, but to other's, it's a stab in the stomach.
Another tragity comming and i was happy with nothing.
So i could never imagine, having it, happen to someone.
Cuz i would rather be runnin.


Link to feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=126414&start=15

[mceddie]

the beat is really fucking awesome, and your flow and lyrics are the shit.
I dont know why but i can see you doing really good in the underground.

[gutawafang]

you're freaking sick man.

[Ticalrecords]

eeeeeeee that shits dope man, yk i've had a line i been holding for a real good song, "is it possible to be heaven sent and hellbound all in one lifetime" , but you fucking nailed the sentiment in that chorus man that shits funny as fuck and depressing as hell, at least from another MC's perspective. the lyrics were tight i could tell after the chorus where you were going with it. delivery was great, it started a lil iffy the first four bars but got real dope as it progressed. overall the song has some nice replay value... i DLed it.

could you return the favor please viewtopic.php?f=38&t=130546

[Nefarious]

Thanks everyone, by the way i only wrote the verses i didnt write the chorus, i only sang it, those are some of the first lyrics ive ever had ghost written for me, by Sage, one of my best friends who raps aswell, it wasnt really planned for him to write it for me, but he prefered how it sounded with me singing it, so i just did it, i didnt think i wouldve been able to write a better chorus than he did on this and seeing how it turned out, im happy i didnt try.

[Solace]

I really like this song, got a couple plays on it. Surprised your voice was this high, I expected something deeper (I've heard you on Vettori tracks but not paid much attention to your parts). Very well written, you've got the mechanics of writing, flow, and a good delivery set down. Regardless if you wrote the chorus or not, you performed it well and it's very pleasing to listen to. Keep dropping tracks bro, get them around! You got a Youtube?

[mdemaz]

My bad, I must of missed this.

Beat is nice.
Your flow was nailed.
I probably felt that you could of used more tone in your vocals, but it doesn't matter, I like your voice a lot the way it was.
The content is good, vocab was great.
Use of punches and entendres were light, but solid.
The hook is nice, the bars for the verses were even and on point.
The transition from the hook to 2nd verse was flawless.
Would think you recorded it in one take...
Epic audio mastering.
I felt you could of used vocal doubling in your verses.

Overall, it's a wicked track dude, keep fucking doing this shit!

[Nefarious]

Awesome feed guys, appreciated, i just made a youtube account but.. making video's pisses me off.
I dont like learning, its a bad quality i have. lol.

[Nefarious]

Bump