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Lyrics are in the description. I just do this appreciation/jokey thing for every 50 subs I get so yeah.
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once
*name* wrote:<3
Good flow there, following the less-is-more concept. If you did anything more with the track it wouldn't feel as 'fun' as it is now. So yes indeed, great shit.
Big Ax-D wrote:hmm, well you know I'm a fan but this was kind of an un-pleasant surprise... Idk, the beat is funnt, but I dont think it fits you.... technically you did everything great, but yeah, not much I could feed you on, It comes down to personal taste I guess, but yeah... no like.
I like the idea though...
keep at it man
mdemaz wrote:The fact you used Mario noises make me instantly love this song.
It sorta gives me a happy vibe, it's weird, because I'm a intensely UNhappy person, how fucking weird.
I'll give you props on flow and lyrics, but the content is pretty mehrish.
Nefarious wrote:The mario beat was funny, but some of those lyrics were to cool to waste on a funny song haha, i know what it feels like to waste cool lyrics tho i write in the multi cypher all the time and its kinda pointless.... id rather hear a real song other than this, i cant say ill listen again but the meaning behind it wasnt really for that i guess.
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