MahMooD - Freestyle

[Mahmoud48]

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This is pure freestyle from the dome no chrome u feels me LOLJK but ya its a freestyle i just spat to this beat i liked

http://soundcloud.com/mahmood-1/freestyle

[B.A.D.]

what kind of feedback is that?

seriously, if you don't up your feedback game, we're gonna have to lock your posts

[Mahmoud48]

what kind of feedback is that?

seriously, if you don't up your feedback game, we're gonna have to lock your posts

THAT WAS A SERIOUS FEEDBK
a feedbk is how i feel about it and thats how i did!

[mdemaz]

I dunno how you do it, but you somehow manage to make your tracks sound like they were recorded a long time ago.
Like 25 years..

Iight, this was obviously a freestyle..So..Yeah, your flow was a bit off at times but overall you maintained it pretty well compared to your other tracks..
So, you know, practice makes perfect I guess.

I mean like, you know what I'm sayin'?
You gotta learn to step your stuff up now for the public.
If you are serious about this rap thing, then you gotta start recording some decent tracks..
Get some dude to mix and engineer your stuff so it sounds pro.

But if you are just having fun doing these tracks, it's all cool though, but at the end of the day you are gonna want to make something out of this.
I can tell by your lyrics you are hungry, you know what I'm sayin'?

No doubt doe, keep dropping.

[Mahmoud48]

I dunno how you do it, but you somehow manage to make your tracks sound like they were recorded a long time ago.
Like 25 years..

Iight, this was obviously a freestyle..So..Yeah, your flow was a bit off at times but overall you maintained it pretty well compared to your other tracks..
So, you know, practice makes perfect I guess.

I mean like, you know what I'm sayin'?
You gotta learn to step your stuff up now for the public.
If you are serious about this rap thing, then you gotta start recording some decent tracks..
Get some dude to mix and engineer your stuff so it sounds pro.

But if you are just having fun doing these tracks, it's all cool though, but at the end of the day you are gonna want to make something out of this.
I can tell by your lyrics you are hungry, you know what I'm sayin'?

No doubt doe, keep dropping.

THX!!!!...im trying to learn how to master and shit but this is the best i can doo. i really wanna put out a offical album because i want to look at music as art. So i wanna create some type of thing in the future. ATM i have no mic and i dont know how to master but maybe in the future i can put out a good album.. Im doing this for me and its for fun i dont want money. I just want people to say im good or something. but forreal THX

[Solace]

I haven't checked you in a while, so I don't know what's up with you and rapping. You moved from the Backstage to Audio Stage, so I'm assuming you're taking a bit more serious, correct? Anyway, I did listen to the whole thing. Feeedback:

Off the top? Pretty nice. You seemed like you were having a good amount of fun while rapping. Enjoying rapping as you do it is a good sign. What are you recording with, as you said you had no mic? Sounded pretty good if it was recorded on a camera. My suggestion for the mixing is to tone down the reverb (too much, imo, some may enjoy it but I didn't), and attempt working with adlibs and overlays. Add some flare into it. Decent enough flow. I mean, it was off here and there, and nothing was complex, but you were freestyling legitimately so it's more than completely fine; it's expected. Keep working MahMooD.

[Mahmoud48]

I haven't checked you in a while, so I don't know what's up with you and rapping. You moved from the Backstage to Audio Stage, so I'm assuming you're taking a bit more serious, correct? Anyway, I did listen to the whole thing. Feeedback:

Off the top? Pretty nice. You seemed like you were having a good amount of fun while rapping. Enjoying rapping as you do it is a good sign. What are you recording with, as you said you had no mic? Sounded pretty good if it was recorded on a camera. My suggestion for the mixing is to tone down the reverb (too much, imo, some may enjoy it but I didn't), and attempt working with adlibs and overlays. Add some flare into it. Decent enough flow. I mean, it was off here and there, and nothing was complex, but you were freestyling legitimately so it's more than completely fine; it's expected. Keep working MahMooD.

Thx....btw is there any free programs on a mac or is garage band my only option

[SG.]

Sounds like a legitimate freestyle. For once, good work, MM. The flow was OK.

Now, I've got an issue with your work. Clearly you knew by posting your previous stuff in Backstage you were going to get sarcastic comments saying you were brilliant. Thing is, it wasn't. With this, you're showing improvement but the multis are still lacking. You need them. Your punchlines are meh. Make them a bit better too.

Clearly you sound like you're having fun. Use that feeling of fun to motivate you to be better.

[Solace]

Thx....btw is there any free programs on a mac or is garage band my only option

Sadly, you are fucked unless you're willing to spend $100 for Adobe Audition CS5.5.

[Mahmoud48]

Thx....btw is there any free programs on a mac or is garage band my only option

Sadly, you are fucked unless you're willing to spend $100 for Adobe Audition CS5.5.

nah ill probably do that in the future...when i can flow better and write better

[SG.]

Thx....btw is there any free programs on a mac or is garage band my only option

Sadly, you are fucked unless you're willing to spend $100 for Adobe Audition CS5.5.

Or pirate it. (See the download thread).

[Solace]

It's hard to find pirated fully operational software by Adobe for a Mac system. PC, sure, but he's running a Mac.

[SG.]

http://www.google.co.uk/search?q=adobe+ ... ent=safari

[Solace]

Well fuck me in the ass and call me MahMooD.