Scrubz wrote:hmm not bad, I'm not judging on the whole accent thing because thats pretty unfair. but I will critisize on the rhyming and structure...wayyyyyy to basic. I know everyone needs to start somewhere but you need to get a little less simple. It was almost like a nursery rhyme. Delvery was shoty and flow was ight. keep up the work man.
Thanks man, yeah this one was basic but I have no doubt on my rhiming quality, I'm not saying I'm a beast but I can definitely write multies and inners.
I'm actually improving and making some new tracks, my next one will certainly be something better flow wise, delivery wise AND rhyming wise.
