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i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby Mr. Chambers » Nov 4th, '11, 22:28

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0_K0cgVgMYs


viewtopic.php?f=38&t=132659

i'm once again getting back into the swing of things....i'll be dropping more regularly.....i'll rtf
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby Elision » Nov 5th, '11, 08:12

This is one of those beats that works for rapping both slow and fast. Because of this (and all of the T9 I've been listening to lately) I kept feeling like you were ramping up to start going fast. It may be me, but it just seems like the beat was asking you for it


That aside -- lyrically this was awesome :) Your multi's all sounded different from eachother, which is something I personally appreciate greatly, Your rhyme schemes were transitioned very smoothly (impressively smoothly, actually) and you stayed on-beat almost the whole time. Good shit :y:
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby Mr. Chambers » Nov 7th, '11, 03:57

thank you sir
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 7th, '11, 08:25

who's that??

its Tom Chambers Mayne!!!!

Yeah I enjoyed it man, first song I listen since I returned from Mexico today, pleasant surprise!!, great punches... flow is flawless man, not a single slip... I think the beat is a beat to loud compared to the vox, but its damn nice, good to see you back :y:
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby AbramIsaac » Nov 7th, '11, 09:26

Your flow is on point and your writing is great. I really like the punchlines you have on there, and it just reminds the listener why they like Tom Chambers when they hear a song like this.

The only negative is your delivery. Maybe it's just because it's a freestyle, but it seems like your energy is a little low. Like you'll be saying something killer but you won't be pushing it with as much emotion as would be expected.

No big though. I don't think it took you too long to do this song, so it's not like you worked your ass off to come out with something lacking energy. You should post more stuff, man. I know you're a busy guy, but I hope it doesn't mean that you can't do music like you used to.
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 7th, '11, 09:55

AbramIsaac wrote: You should post more stuff, man. I know you're a busy guy, but I hope it doesn't mean that you can't do music like you used to.


I'll take care of that :shifty:
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby Mr. Chambers » Nov 7th, '11, 23:05

^its not a question of dropping stuff...its just i'm in a dry slump along with aLOT of working. rap isn't paying my bills yet.....
but like i said....time to come back
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby Maybe » Nov 8th, '11, 08:21

Not bad man, not bad at all. I like it for the most part, and I can't really complain much.

What are your plans on another album?
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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby Ticalrecords » Nov 9th, '11, 01:28

it was pretty good, i liked most of the lyrics, and your flow is cool too. your delivery is also good, not much to say, except a job well done.

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Re: i'ma boss freestyle-tom chambers

Postby Joel Venom » Nov 30th, '11, 07:37

great work chambers! keep it up with the good work my dudeskee!
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