Scrubz - Snake bitten

[Scrubz]

What up guys, i've been in cali since early in the summer taking care of work so I haven't got to use the net really since then. I've been working on my new Ep ever since and it will be done relatively soon. For now here's my latest, a teaser for the tape, 20 bars hope you enjoy.

You can leave feed back here, on youtube or both idc, i will re turn the favor.

one of a few LOF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=133502


REVERBNATION: http://www.reverbnation.com/travisblakeslee
FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Scrubz-TG ... 4115023718


LYRICS:
same name, same game aint a damn thang change
since the last time i came threw that fuckin door
no chain, so lame, but i still got game
cop brain like nobody ever saw beofre
beat right, flow tight boutta catch flight
mc's to on lookers sittin at a red light
recite sound bites, while i ignite
livin for the thrill you can call it rob and bigs life
so hommie sit tight bout to pick the pace up
go on a pick a case up il hit em with the bass sucka
cuz im an ace, with a pace that will dominate
you can try to chase, savin face, but you want none of it
pretend runnin it, while I go and get to it
rhyme fluent, while i try to bethe fuckin best to do it
and when i am, imma be like III knew it yall blew it
like a porn star while she bumpin my music
I influence all the uppin commers, rap runners
that youngin they buggin, cuz i took the game from em
I sprung in, bell ringin fist swingin hell bringin
pure venom you gone get ur self snake bitten

[Tranquil]

Yoooo, this shit was sick. Flow was pretty good and enjoyable. One thing is your delivery, maybe try and switch it up on a few tracks cause it pretty much sounds the same on every other track. But I get that this is just a teaser track so its all good!

Nice wordplay on this track, just wish that it was a little longer cause if you transformed this into an actual song, it would be a banger. The beat was pretty good, I take it your produced it? Whats I think is missing in beat is the... hardness(?). What would've made the track that much better would've been if the beat was more hard hitting!

Overall pretty good teaser track, I'll be on the lookout for the EP man.

[B.A.D.]

lol, you finally decided to appear

damn your sound quality improved loads man, sounds fresh n clean.
non much I can say, the beat is also great, nice short verse bro, looking forward for more

[mdemaz]

I checked this out already when you posted on my wall.

It was pretty cool.
It's good to finally see you back in the game, hopefully your EP will be dope as fuck.
I know you are coming of age, so am I.

[mceddie]

really sick beat, and great flow and lyrics! Props! Only thing i'd say, is you seem to lack emotion in your voice. You should say shit like you really mean it! Other than that, sick ass track bro. !




8/10.

[Scrubz]

good looks everyone!

[Phantom]

nice track bro, where you at in cali? southern?

[Scrubz]

thsnks!^^ And nah i was in Nor Cal, Mendocino area. chillin with rastas in the mountains haha.