Infected Ink - Freeverse

[InfectedInk]

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Hey everyone. We're an upcoming Hip-Hop duo from Toronto. Our first track is coming out soon, but this is a video of our MC spitting a freeverse acapella. We hope that you enjoy it, and any time taken to view the freeverse and give some feedback is appreciated!

[Ka0t1c]

ehh, u got some freestyle rhymes, but most of it just didn't sound right, seems like you're trying too hard to be dope. spit something that's meaningful, otherwise, this is another one of them throwaways that nobody cares for after the first listen, or at least that's the case with me

[Willy]

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He's right, man. Obviously you have rhyming down, but what makes the listener want to listen to you over any other dude that can string four or five syllable rhymes together? You need to bring something new to the table.

Also, when you go to record... you CANNOT rap like this. It won't sound good at all, you need to rap like you mean it. If you think the line is dope as fuck, say it with some confidence.

Good luck dude!

[mdemaz]

Boring delivery man, but I like your voice.
Maybe raise it up a few pitches and it'd sound cool.

Cool capacitor mic' btw, what brand is it?

[InfectedInk]

ehh, u got some freestyle rhymes, but most of it just didn't sound right, seems like you're trying too hard to be dope. spit something that's meaningful, otherwise, this is another one of them throwaways that nobody cares for after the first listen, or at least that's the case with me

Thanks for listening. I understand where you're coming from. With this one we just wanted to try to give a taste of the style and such. The tracks will have more substance.

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He's right, man. Obviously you have rhyming down, but what makes the listener want to listen to you over any other dude that can string four or five syllable rhymes together? You need to bring something new to the table.

Also, when you go to record... you CANNOT rap like this. It won't sound good at all, you need to rap like you mean it. If you think the line is dope as fuck, say it with some confidence.

Good luck dude!

Thank you. The delivery and emotion is something pointed often and will be worked on hard to get better.

Boring delivery man, but I like your voice.
Maybe raise it up a few pitches and it'd sound cool.

Cool capacitor mic' btw, what brand is it?

Thanks for checking it out. The mic is an Apex 440.

[B.A.D.]

yeah, pretti much what was said above, the rhymes are nice and the flow is aite, nice technique, but yeah, there was no emotion and no-real originality on this one. plus I think the fact that you are too far and looking away from the camera doesnt make it as enjoyable.

but I am looking forward for a full track, so keep it up man

Welcome to the site, thanks for reading the rules

[InfectedInk]

yeah, pretti much what was said above, the rhymes are nice and the flow is aite, nice technique, but yeah, there was no emotion and no-real originality on this one. plus I think the fact that you are too far and looking away from the camera doesnt make it as enjoyable.

but I am looking forward for a full track, so keep it up man

Welcome to the site, thanks for reading the rules

Thank you for all the constructive criticism. It really helps and it is appreciated.

[Kez]

Can obviously rhyme, but you sound bored as fuck which transfers.

Do an actual song and i'll try to judge more closely.

[InfectedInk]

Can obviously rhyme, but you sound bored as fuck which transfers.

Do an actual song and i'll try to judge more closely.

Thanks for checking it out. First track coming very soon!