Solace - Stand Tall

[Solace]

You don't have to say it three times to get my attention bud. I'll PM you when I get on my desktop.

[Solace]

Definitely dope to see you venturing into the AS

Thanks Lello

[Tash8]

Chorus is catchy but you didn't deliver it as well as i thought you could. I think a lil more singy songy rap like Nas does on My Country. Your verses are good, I do like ur delivery on this and it fits the beat well. I'm not completely positive on this statement but if i recall correctly, every single song you've had your lines end on the snare... idk i really would like to see more change ups, not necessarily between songs but also between rhyme schemes within a song...I think that stuff makes songs more interesting to listen to, especially after the first, second, third listen..

[4NorthTL]

I really liked the flow and lyrics in this one. Good song, and I like the way you repeated some words at the end of a few lines. I'm assuming you just recorded that over another track and I suggest messing around with the echo and echo chamber feature that you'll find in alot of recording software.

The only constructive criticism I can offer is two of Eminem's strengths. If your beat is set at 80 BPM, don't rhyme at a pace of 80 BPM through the entire song. You can flow well with 40 and 160, something Em does alot of, a good example would be in the third verse of All She Wrote.

Also, don't be afraid to get mad and really accentuate certain words at the end of a line. Not every line means as much as the next, so sometimes one line will require a little more anger than the rest to really get the point across, once again, something Em does quite often.

Very good job though, peace. TL

[Solace]

I would not know how to do a more sing-songy chorus, so I can't imagine in my head how it would be better. My Country has a dope chorus though. I'm not positive on that statement either, I would like to think that I don't follow that pattern but it wouldn't surprise me considering a tend to maintain similar techniques in almost every song I do. I would like to see change ups from myself too, I'll work harder on that. Thanks Tash, great to see you post once more around here.