AhdduB - Hell Raiser

[Ticalrecords]

POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=142385&p=1837604#p1837604


aite, i just recorded this song, its a remix to Wayne's Money to Blow. tell me what yall think


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/hell-raiser-mtb-remix


Money to blow

Yea yea - I am here for one thing only
To get a nice whip and flashier rollie
So I am very sorry – if you don’t like my story,
I gave you my heart - but now that shit just bores me
Now all I want is glory – all you should want is more me
Yea Make me blush – face redder than a whore’s knees
When she blows you - cuz she knows - you got season floor seats,
And the only phrase – that you wont say- is no we can’t afford these/
I used to try so hard – ironically a faux pa,
Out rhyme erryone and then laughably get stonewalled
understand the problem – how was I to solve em?
didn’t realize it was something bigger that I was involved in,
So as a last resort – I asked the lord
what the fuck am I rapping for?
The cash and whores? - The flashy cars
Fuck it I feel like the matadors,
Who risk slipping in some bullshit,
And know they really should quit
But every time they get in the ring
they feel like the pasture in the pulpit



No no – see you don’t understand me
Please - Tell me what I gotta do to Up the ante
Try and read my poker face – tell me what the stoners say
Cuz ever since I turned my back on them they been extorting me,
Put me through the guilt trips – yes you can still get,
Me to represent cuz my hometown Louisville is,
The only place in the world that I’ll ever call home,
So in a manner of speaking – consider this my swan song/
in the studio – with the music on – accusing those
fucking groupie hoes – of giving me some stupid coke,
cuz ahdduB knows - that when doing blow – ya lose control
and you can go – from a single line to shooting O’s
up ya arm or through ya nose – and it don’t matter cuz truth be told
they love to see ya life turn into a bad joke
till then I’ll be Clinton tryna maintain the black vote
on MTV talking - like I really give a fuck
haha and that’s when I was told that I should really live it up/

[iain08]

I've never heard the original song, so I might miss something.

I like your flow, it's different but it fits with your voice here because you kind of have a comical tone to it (dunno if that's intentional or not).

Didn't like the chorus though, the singing was wack.

[Trimss]

I think it's kinda good, but I have something to ask to you. Can you do like a more serious and angry tone? Like for a song, just to try it or something.

Lyrics are good, flow doesn't seem bad but the content is a bit meh to me but i guess it's just a braggadacio song. It was cool enough for me to keep listening to it, well minus the chorus. lol

[Ticalrecords]

loll no one seems to like my choruses...fuck it. but seriously thanks for the feedback i really appreciate it.

and yes i plan on doing some serious songs, just waiting for the right inspiration yk

[Eedee]

Interesting to say the least. You have the same sarcastic tone of voice on every song lol you should really try an emotional track or one where you're just fucking angry as shit, yell at the top of your lungs, just flip and go apeshit one of these days.

But this track was good. Good vocab to be honest, the "faux pa / stonewalled" rhyme I wasn't expecting, good shit. Beat was average, but went well with your delivery. Lyrics were good, rhymes were solid. Good drop!

Care to feed back? Appreciate it man. viewtopic.php?f=38&t=142504